"You saw the map, Vega. You saw the web. You are not just a wizard of Britain. You are a citizen of the Deep World."
Harry Potter: Variable Star (OC Insert | Harry Potter Marauders Era)
Book&Literature · DarkeBones
Look like a group of old nobility who are delusional and live in their past glory. They do not seem to be the true architects of the wizard world.
"Bring him back when he bleeds," the Khan called out as they walked to the golden doors. "When he has killed his first man. Then we will drink kumis and talk of war."
Harry Potter: Variable Star (OC Insert | Harry Potter Marauders Era)
Book&Literature · DarkeBones
The first men! So all magic comes from the old gods... I know! The MC is the heir of the three eyed raven!
"Magic was not discovered," the Khan lectured, pointing to the map. "It was inherited. The First Men—the Ancients—built a civilization that spanned the globe. They didn't need wands. They used geometry. They used the stars."
Harry Potter: Variable Star (OC Insert | Harry Potter Marauders Era)
Book&Literature · DarkeBones
He knows where it hurts
"Preferably a place without outsiders."
GOT: Rooted Ambition
Book&Literature · Xorath
It is realistic not to try to change Bran's fate. Behind his accident is the three eyed raven scheme. Preventing the accident is making an enemy of the three eyed raven. Plus, it would shift many future plot lines such as the assassination attempt on Bran that leads to Ned trusting Littlefinger.
Galon felt sympathy, but not enough to interfere. The timeline needed to remain intact — at least for now.
GOT: Rooted Ambition
Book&Literature · Xorath
An average novel with a good start then it becomes word padding. In the beginning, there's much foreshadowing, MC seems to be struggling, and though there's not one trace of a plot, the chapters flowed smoothly. However, after the MC starts training to become 'stronger', it becomes a word padding grinding fest. Whereas in the beginning there was a serious vibe, it becomes a comedy around chapter 30-40 with nothing driving the story forward except training.
Add slice of life tag to the story
If only the translation was the main issue...
It's painful to read fanfics written by those who did not understand the original story. Itachi was just a pawn. Even if you remove him, Danzo will not let the Uchiha live in peace.
Then in eight years… no, before that, he would kill Uchiha Itachi himself—before Shisui's death awakened his Mangekyō.
Naruto: An Informant from the Uchiha
Anime & Comics · Daoist_Jinzu
Thanks for the chapter. I can't help but notice Vega requires a focus. In the last scene, he seems to seek his brother and grandfather attention when such a deep phenomenon that influences him directly happens. As if he wanted to share his emotions with them. I would have thought he would have wanted to connect with his emotions, with his wand, to focus on himself rather than those around him. Yeah, to me, the MC lacks the selfishness that drives a person. His focus is not on himself but on others. Does he lives, grows and overcomes challenge for himself or others?
Harry Potter: Variable Star (OC Insert | Harry Potter Marauders Era)
Book&Literature · DarkeBones