The story is off to a good start but can you maybe extend the chapters or maybe kinda speed it up a little most of this stuff could have been worked into the first four chapters I know you wanted some world building and background just some of this stuff seem too spaced out but if you continue like this it's fine too
This book has been deleted.
Where is the original?
ch 0 8 CHAPTER 8: BOUNTY 120 MILLION!
Anime & Comics · Daoist1005
Is it me or are the chapters getting shorter 🤔🤔🤔
ch 53 Power Up
Anime & Comics · LanceVance
Is it me or are the chapters getting shorter and shorter 🤔🤔
ch 576 Extra 15: Dragon & Dragon Maids (7)
Anime & Comics · GenoXX
Good story would love to see more chapters
ch 0 5 Second Hunt
My Rage For All
Anime & Comics · Shoop_The_Mystic