Dao_Supreme111

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lalalalalala~

Eucharistic War Battleground

Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System

Fantasy · thefirespeaks

Dao_Supreme111

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the update!

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Dao_Supreme111

1yr

Posted

This has been so far a good ride. Writing Quality is top-notch. How the story develops is to my liking. As for the character design, I love how the author an unconventional way of bringing a character from another world to Earth. Earth also changed in terms of its electromagnetic energy (not gonna spoil it because the first chapter is awesome). All in all, the author did a great job portraying his story! Kudos! I am in awe! More chapters to writeee!!! Waiting!!!

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Dao_Supreme111

1yr

Replied to Quintessential_Guy

No, I'm gonna have to disagree with you. Specifically, with the long paragraphs of explanations that could be compressed, concise and just enough. That's why I said the world background was quite vague. It started just like that and then *poof* soul record, then succubus thing and the likes appeared out of nowhere. I know it's for the mystery of the story, but it just doesn't fit well. The long sentences bothered me as well.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

Dao_Supreme111

1yr

Replied to Dao_Supreme111

I hope this doesn't get deleted.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

Dao_Supreme111

1yr

Posted

BEAR WITH ME. I don't know why people love this novel. I've been up to Chapter 40 and yet I didn't exactly feel anything. I haven't felt any excitement at all. I think most of the people are here for the romantic stuff and vivid descriptions of beautiful and sexy ladies, which really sucks. As for the story development along with the World Background, it doesn't give much information to make me more understand it clearly. In other words, it's vague. It's packed with action scenes, but they didn't even make me feel any shit. It's just leveling up without any proper character development. Oh, I get it that the mc is fighting for the hope that his family is still alive. Heck, I know they're still alive. They gotta be. If not, I don't know what'll happen to him. This is quite good for a character design as well, but it wasn't laid out very much for you to feel something from it. Very shallow in a sense that I can't even feel it when internal monologues of the mc channels their way to the narrative. Anyway, I'm giving this a 2.4/5 review. It had grammatical errors but understandable. It's just not my preference of a story.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

Dao_Supreme111

1yr

Replied to LostEra

So impatient, bruh. Not gonna leave anything character development? Do you expect some development to happen in the early chapters, at the very least 100 chapters, to make him change af? Well, SPOILER, in the near hundredth chapter, he'll change his thinking eventually. If you're this impatient even at chapter 5, then you're gonna have to kneel over those who didn't screw until the paid chapters. This is definitely not your type of tea, bruh. 😂 ps. just happened to see your comment while waiting for an update 🙌

Yang Lujia ignored his disciple's reaction and went on saying: "Before you go inside the Blood World I made on the way, I have to remind you of the rules of being my disciple. Firstly, don't act like you're a hero when going outside. If you see someone getting wronged or almost killed, don't help them. You don't know what consequences will fall upon you if you help the disadvantaged party.