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Gold is a weak metal, soft. It doesn't seem like a very good martial art if it's called Goldfinger, it's like calling it Soft Finger.

Eh, as soon as it got weebie I dipped.

Literally why I stopped reading this here.

His power adheres to the laws of the universe. He can't regenerate from one cell. If he did, it would be a new person, because new neurons are empty and untrained- he'd be like an animal in the shape of a man for the first few years of life after regeneration- doesn't sound like the best kind of immortal to me. :|

I was lied to. Since when did GOW stand for God of War? It's ALWAYS stood for Gears of War in gaming culture. ALWAYS.

It's going to be interesting to see what will happen if you put poseidon into gears of war.

Translator translated spirit as demon.. interesting.

Also- author agrees that Boruto is canon and that Naruto has aliens. Boo. Any true naruto fan says it ends at the end of Shippuden and Kaguya isn't some alien but an anomalous woman who discovered Chakra and used it to become a powerful immortal until her sons locked her away for wanting to devour all chakra in the world. Boruto and most of the movies are non-canon to any sensibly minded fan of naruto.

This is the utmost junk-food novel in existence, it's pure hot trash.

Right, lame af, actually doesn't work in combat. People who think it does are anime weebs. Which author obviously is because he kept banging on about how mc went to japan to mastered every martial art because he's an uber chad.

Okay- it's bugging me now. Bodily isn't a word you can use in this way. If you remove Bodily, every time you use it, the story makes more sense.

Nor would he watch one piece. Naruto is a serious parallel world story. One Piece is just downright silly. Dude's made out of rubber because he ate a fruit and he's like that forever. Every character in One Piece is therefore just randomly acquired power vs Naruto where everyone trained hard for their powers.

oof, bad english :(

Pointless, that just turns him into a Hozuki clan member.

reborn as harry? Ugh, no thanks, I'm out.

Sigh. What a fucking shame. Biokinetic ability, check. Anti-hero MC, check. Interesting backstory and reason for ROB existing, check. The let down and deal breaker is this has to be a fiction for a JP anime that's absolute dogshit.

Shadow Clone itself is a literal cheat. It makes every jutsu OP. For example, Flying Raijin x Shadow Clones, you can teleport to any shadow clone, anywhere at any time and they can do the same - ofc the limiter is chakra amount for sustainability. Since none of the MC's moves use chakra, because they aren't from the Nin world- if he learned Shadow Clone instead of Flying Raijin, he'd be unstoppable- he could instead put all his chakra into shadow clones and then they could swarm the enemy instead. So now he'd have quantity AND quality.

What a shame. If you'd just had the MC be reincarnated normally, this would've been fine. The MC has centuries worth of life experience- i.e., you're just making up a reason why the MC can magically deduce everything that's happening like some omniscient spectator.

Additionally, just having orange hair doesn't automatically mean you're an uzumaki. Look at Yahiko, for example.

VERY bad writing. Feels like a twelve year old wrote this. 'Special Ops Soldier' MCs are so cringe.