So, concept is pretty typical and had peaked my interest immediately. First chapter was decent, and it is pretty well written with little to no error. Unfortunately, it already has gaps and inconsistency with the plot and quite a bit of disconnect. The example I will give is how Ren talks about how no one has gotten alchemist before and no one knows how to get it including himself and yet from the beginning he purposely chooses arcanist with the plan to achieve alchemist. Or, “this game is really difficult. 100 coins for a basic mage tomb. First quest complete 1000 coins” Though this more of my irritation with not understanding the ”difficulty” in the storie’s game. I will just pass on this one. Good luck to writer and readers.
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So, concept is pretty typical and had peaked my interest immediately. First chapter was decent, and it is pretty well written with little to no error. Unfortunately, it already has gaps and inconsistency with the plot and quite a bit of disconnect. The example I will give is how Ren talks about how no one has gotten alchemist before and no one knows how to get it including himself and yet from the beginning he purposely chooses arcanist with the plan to achieve alchemist. Or, “this game is really difficult. 100 coins for a basic mage tomb. First quest complete 1000 coins” Though this more of my irritation with not understanding the ”difficulty” in the storie’s game. I will just pass on this one. Good luck to writer and readers.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
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