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Shallowman
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You can expect him substantially improve some movies and use others as inspiration to create his own movies from ground up... there is also fair shair of ctrl+v ctrl+c
Moreover, the greatest highlight of the movie "Buried" was the chilling and slightly desperate sense of reality, as if there really was a person buried alive, and the audience's perception had to make them believe it was real. If this couldn't be achieved, the film would be a failure. That sharpness that fell between a documentary and a fictional film was exactly the characteristic this movie needed.
Legendary Hollywood Director
Realistic · Shallowman
He is very petty in this one, as if he returned to the days of pro wrestling
ch 231 Behind-the-scenes intrigue
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman
Depends on the mood. Might suddenly want to translate some, and voila, 100+ new chapters. And then again indefinite hiatus
Box office announcement
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman
Such is the life, making lemonades out of sour grapes
Box office announcement
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman
Being a slave to realism might prove detrimental to the novel. It will feel like deus ex instead. Yes, random things happen a lot more frequently, and such is the life, but you can never set up for randomness, and setting up is one of the most important things an authour can do in his book
(P.S. Author inquiry- I was wondering how would you feel if I killed a major character like this. From a common cold, fever, or other illness. Because such things did happen in real life. Many, many important figures just got ill and died. Imagine Menes taking a bath in the icy cold water with a few of his bodyguards as a fun pass time, catching a fever, and then suddenly dying. How would you feel? Shocking or underwhelming? Comment.)
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Pointing out that modern people would understand the princess’ hidden killing intent, but for some reason glossing over the fact that Alexander was also a modern person is just yet another detrimental factor
"Great!" And it was as such that Alexander remained completely oblivious to the hidden danger he was injecting himself with, and instead actually cheered the girl's acquiescence to his offer.
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Oh, that’s where the inspiration behind Genshin Impact comes from
And such examples were a dime a dozen even in Alexander's previous life, with perhaps the most famous one being Genshin Khan, who was even reported to have said, 'A man's greatest pleasure was to take others wives and daughters.
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Bro, you are overusing this “for” clause. Tone it down a bit, otherwise it will end up causing reader’s fatigue
For she was horrified seeing just how easily her older brother whom she had once idolized so much, and the mother whom she saw as a role model both simply roll over their back and bow their head to this tyrant without an ouch of shame, the same tyrant who had destroyed her family's legacy and put her father into eternal sleep.
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
I hope this is not the “asking for a friend” kind of joke. But in all seriousness, the author intentionally writes ”ommited” to not go into graphic details, and it won’t be the only time
Just like "soft murmurs", "pretending to stroll", "gentle breaths", "coquettish shyness during the rain". (Three thousand words skipped.)
Legendary Hollywood Director
Realistic · Shallowman
Well, who asked us to willingly go under the yolk of Chinese novel conveyor. RoyalRoad just can’t keep up
So, he quickly left a comment under the post, "Also at the landmark theater in Los Angeles. Young Master Renly is like a moving feast, the vibrant colors only truly shine when he's actually moving. Just like when I watched his performance of "Ophelia" on the street, and now tonight, seeing him discuss acting at the cinema."
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman
The original text says the good ol “young master”, so I already took a lot of liberties by changing it to “young heir”... most of the time. I guess the author infused a lot of Internet and fandom elements from China into that of the Western, so it can indeed be jarring in some cases. At least they are not saying “I bought a watch” or “wocao”
So, he quickly left a comment under the post, "Also at the landmark theater in Los Angeles. Young Master Renly is like a moving feast, the vibrant colors only truly shine when he's actually moving. Just like when I watched his performance of "Ophelia" on the street, and now tonight, seeing him discuss acting at the cinema."
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman
I’m good) Surprised to see someone who can bring up such an antic reference, definitely an old time reader
ch 600 Don Quixote
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman
ch 335 Preparations
Legendary Hollywood Director
Realistic · Shallowman
Alexander was reluctant to forego the opportunity to pad the word count some more
And when thinking about it as such, Alexander felt even a bit reluctant to leave.
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Although there are moments where the 4th wall gets brokens with Alexander’s inner monologues, but that shouldn’t be the case with the 3rd person narration as only the former is justified with this type if serious novel. This tonal shift easily breaks the immersion, which is already in tatters to be completely honest. Yet another detriment
Dom would be proud.
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Author doing usual eastern style antagonism to spice things up, to which I agree it being unnecessary and out of place
ch 286 Bloodied Clash
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman
Perseus having more plot armor than MC lol
ch 890 Perseus's Last Stand
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
There are still 1800+ chapters. I’m just translating it on and off since it’s a hobby
ch 600 Don Quixote
The Legendary Actor
Realistic · Shallowman