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The MC should have some sense of humanity. He always took his people as expendable soldiers or troops dedicated to his will. It's quite annoying but he should value them and also think of them as humans not just soldiers who needs to fie for his sake.

ch 59 Discovery of a Golden Disk

Lord of the Oasis

Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao

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2yr

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I'm sad, somebody died. They could have just used the slopes of the dunes to defend or made a long line of pitfalls around their camp to avoid sudden attacks isn't that the basic tactic of defence during medieval times? Oh, maybe that parallel world doesn't have that tactic 🤣

ch 16 Irreconcilable Differences

Lord of the Oasis

Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao

PickyReader

2yr

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The novel started really great. Good character introduction and nice coloring the setting vibes to solemn BUT the story turns out of reason when he acquired the system. The MC suddenly turned arrogant. The vile characters began to be friendly (It almost seems like everyone got an amnesia). The world building is also quite a bit unreasonable. It is a mix mash of medieval, sci-fi, modern, xianxia, and wuxia.(Should have been a really great novel for me if the background was reasonable and supported by some good details of explanation for the readers to understand what and how the society works) A good example would be: Why was the military suddenly turned useless? Just because some over powered human can be as dangerous as nuclear? That does not make sense when hot weapons still work. (Those super powered humans still bleed and die) Another example was: How and why was slaves suddenly sprouted up? It's very unreasoble when the government, media and society is still working like just like a modern community. Then the story flow is very smooth sailing. Have a bit of downfall rise up become stronger and the same rotation. Anyway, it is a great novel! but it seems like it's not my cup of tea. But don't be discouraged just because of some negative review(like this). Not everyone have the same likes, so continue and strive to create a great novel!

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit