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might as well bring Broly to this universe

isn't it about time that MC heads towards other world's, if you're going to make him dual to or stronger than dragon gods there's really not many world's which he can go aside from hakoniwa, after all even DC or Marvel world only has a few comic universe where there are stronger characters than them

vile kuzu, the he'll kund of naming sense do you have, who named their MC 'trash'

so the bustard Mc is just a licker

Dude you should use a proper cultivating system rather than just using Surya namaskar as a way to increase MC strength as it feels weird, you can use the kundli and Chakra path openings as a cultivation system , also chinese using Surya namaskar feels weird because they will never accept something from other culture directly without changing it to suit their own culture and claiming it their original.

dude why don't bring the mondaiji tachi world into the mix as that world was created because they can take care of every other universe that existed

her name is tatsuki not tatsumaki

Might as well let aizen and ichigo to cross here, i believe the world will become much more interesting

dude you just combined two different novels besides magician itself was created in dxd world by coping the devils

give a R18 or * tag for all cjapters with sexual content

dude i remember this novel is completely translated, if you're trying to plagarize at least add something new like a new soul in the Mc body rather than the original cowardly Mc or anything

the title sound too wrong

dude change his name at list make it morgan or morgun, morgana sound like a women name

dude this novel has like 2000 chapters in mtl if i remember, and if what i read is correct you're neither translating it nor adding explicit sexual scenes like others do so why post it one by one chapters

dude it's a chinese novel which is alrrady mtl'ed, since you're updating it here at least translate it just don't post it as it is beside the name of the protagonist is rokudo mukuro not liu dao and he is a character in katekyo hitman reborn anime the guardian of the mist

destroy him mentally and physically

What's the bloody point of making MC so much strong at the start, it just ruin the novel

well if you have read highschool dxd novel then you shouldvknow that egyption god RA in fact one of the top 10 beings where as odin and zeus didn't even enter top 20 so basically it will be a massacre