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2018-08-23 Joined United States
good starting chapter :)
ch 0 1 A Message from the Universe
Fantasy · gacob
I would add a too in front of afraid here
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Fantasy · gacob
I think it's more common to have Mr. President instead of referring to them as President
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Fantasy · gacob
and report to reports
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Fantasy · gacob
I would change "your formality" to "the formalities" here
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Fantasy · gacob
this arrow looks OK on PC, but on mobile it moves to an awkward 2 lines
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Fantasy · gacob
Me and you?
"Me and you both know you're not going to hurt him Quinn." Momo said, "If you attack too deep and kill him, you'll be in trouble, attack to shallow and we will pounce on you and make you wish you were dead."
Fantasy · JKSManga
phone :)
ch 73 Chu Yang's Decision
Eastern · PurpleSpring
nice feature ☺️
ch 53 New System Feature
Eastern · PurpleSpring
Maybe he's trying to look out for the main character. The main character doesn't really have many job prospects, so it's good for the teacher to manipulate one of his classmates to give him a stable job?
The teacher praised Parker.
Fantasy · Wonder Fist
I like how the main character is multiple realms ahead of his disciples and knows more about cultivation. Other novels make the MC seem like a scam artist, being barely a couple of subrealms in front of his disciples :(
ch 35 Newcomer Tournament
Eastern · PurpleSpring
It seems like there is a manga coming out called Immortal World's First Undercover Agent. I'm certain once that manga gets translated, there will be a lot more traffic to your book. Your translation is really easy to read, please continue your work :)
ch 0 4 dropped note
Immortal world first undercover
Fantasy · LittleClouds