I don't really look at tags and R-18 can mean a lot of different things
ch 87 Slaughter Part2
Fantasy · Yolohy
I didn't sign up for a horror-gore story. you should put something earlier in the story that indicates how brutal this is. the beginning of the story promised a cute fun story about a person who reincarnated into a dog. this is just gruesome. there are probably people who appreciate this kind of thing that are turned off by the cutsy nature of the first few chapters that would read if you indicated it would get this bad latter on. and there are people like me who are turned off by the unexpected gore. you end up with less people reading the story. you might want to describe the MCs first death in more gruesome detail to signal to readers that hey while it starts out cute and fun, it is fundamentally a gruesome horror story. that way more people who appreciate that kind of story will get this far. it's important to make keep the promises you make to your readers, or failing that change going back to update the original promise.
ch 87 Slaughter Part2
Fantasy · Yolohy
love the title lol 😂
Bang Bang Boom Part1
Fantasy · Yolohy
yeah that is going to be especially true for children because they don't have the tools to evaluate a piece of feedback that was given and figure out what parts they should ignore and what they want to change about themselves.
"She must be so proud of her non-dead-end job as a receptionist for 25 years," Hera thought to herself.
Fantasy · Perizou
we all process feedback differently. I try to take even rude and mean feedback as an opportunity for introspection. I also try not to take it to personally. idk maybe it is unhealthy, but good feedback is hard to come by so I take what I can get. sometimes I get frustrated when I try to give people feedback and they get defensive and ignore me as a result. it's probably because I give it too bluntly and with the wrong tone of voice as you said. my comment was probably me projecting that fustration onto Hera.
"She must be so proud of her non-dead-end job as a receptionist for 25 years," Hera thought to herself.
Fantasy · Perizou
all of the politics
ch 191 A New Kind of Captain
Fantasy · EternalNightLotus
they need an economist to explain this stuff
"No, you don't put the full value of the tools in each product. It's more like a piece of it," Hera and Blue explained what they could about the most basic notions of human society.
Fantasy · Perizou
it's not ironic she specifically chose this location for this reason. lol
Mo Tiange was unaware of this. It was ironically fortunate that she had gone to this place. Otherwise, she might've already been drawn into a battle.
Fantasy · Yun Ji
she is already a strong FL. although she is physically not strong, she has tons of agency and is able to proactively fight for her own survival. I also am excited to see her grow stronger in her cultivation, but she has always been a strong FL.
She took out a Jade Slip engraved with the map of this place from her robe. Nevertheless, she found that the map was too rough. With no distinct features of this place, she simply couldn't find her position on the map. She could only give up, cautiously hide her breath, take out her Green-Wood Sword and make her way through this forest.
Fantasy · Yun Ji
??? I don't understand how this comment relates to mine
ch 0 2 Someone sees you
Fantasy · Perizou
lolol consider my disbelief suspended
To say I was freaked out would be an understatement, I was on the verge of tears and started hyperventilating. That damnable god! He is the cause of this horrible thing. I started to sob, sniffles and everything while invisible snot trailed out my nose. After that, my body calmed down and I came to terms with the situation.
Fantasy · queenk091
when you are younger you brain has more neuroplasticity so it is easier to learn. your brain is at its best at 14, and it declines from there
Another thing that Kylie discovered was that she actually understood all her lessons easily. Her brain was like a sponge that absorbed everything she saw, and she hardly needed any time to think about it. Additional Maths that had her pulling her hair out and a subject she could never pass before, was now as easy as simple addition. It was only some basic formula. Physics? What used to be something that had her crying her eyes out in memorizing the tables and sequences now appeared as simple as following a recipe.
Urban · PsyberRose
i don't really care about guild politics unless its through Hera's pov.
ch 181 The New Dawn project
Fantasy · Perizou
very good chapters. its fun watching ramian develope all his peeps
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Fantasy · VicL
i was excited because the book had a promising beginning. she got kicked out of her house because she was ugly and her path to cultivating was blocked and i was excited to read how she or the reincarnated overcame those obstacles. I am disappointed because both of those obstacles were resolved by deus ex machina. you should write the story you want, i am just explaining my perspective.
I would say I now have a B cup size breast and Goddess Zeruna has E cup size breast. On my current new body I can see that my hips are starting to expand out giving me a little bit of curvature and my butt sticks out a little bit. Which is very weird to think that this is now my body and it looks like this. Although knowing my body will one day perfectly resemble Goddess Zeruna who is 6'0 and has much larger hips and a big butt makes me feel even weirder about this entire situation.
Fantasy · Masquerade1010
it would be more interesting then her becoming shockingly pretty if just because it hasn't been done as much. you also could have made it so she is not ugly, just not nearly as good looking as her siblings... i want to read a book where the mc has to overcome obstacles and grow as a person because of it. so yes I think thr mc staying ugly would have been vastly more interesting.
I would say I now have a B cup size breast and Goddess Zeruna has E cup size breast. On my current new body I can see that my hips are starting to expand out giving me a little bit of curvature and my butt sticks out a little bit. Which is very weird to think that this is now my body and it looks like this. Although knowing my body will one day perfectly resemble Goddess Zeruna who is 6'0 and has much larger hips and a big butt makes me feel even weirder about this entire situation.
Fantasy · Masquerade1010
there is a difference between zombies and this. this is way worse then anything that came before it. to me anyway. the first few chapters were cute and fun. the first few chapters set the tone of the story.
ch 87 Slaughter Part2
Reincarnated as a Dog with System
Fantasy · Yolohy