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Reading Status: C5
Dope novel has a lot of potential I hope you keep updating it. I look forward to see how he advances in the tech tree and how you develop the world. View More
The Scientist and Engineer class holder that appeared in another world!
3 days ago
Reading Status: C9
How does he go to a Pokemon world and not catch any Pokemon plus he gives out his Pokemon like candy, especially considering the fact he doesn't like to catch them himself. It is like selling a friend out I think he is looking at Pokemon in different ways too much. One second he is not catching Pokemon than hes giving it away to other people to use or take on a journey. I just think he should be more into training Pokemon and that if hes from another world or something he should know that some Pokemon enjoy training and adventures plus he can actually accomplish something, considering the Pokemon world is all about battles. View More
Pokemon: The Wandering Guardian
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C5
Theirs never enough fallout fanfics, I love this novel I cant wait to see what he does in the fallout world. I also hope he finds his father for revenge and starts becoming op af but at the same time I want him to work his way up like most raiders. I also hope he can start to make new things for instance if the institute can make teleport technology why cant they get rid of radiation or teleport it into space or somethin it makes no sense that no1 was able to figure it out after over 200 years tbh. I also dont like the fact that the Chinese and other countries dont have a lot of story in the game so I hope the author makes some creative ideas for the rest of the world maybe he can conquer the world or the universe because of those damn alien probes lol. View More
Fallout 4 Infinity
3 months ago
Reading Status: C21
I like the novel but the grammar and spellcheck make it unreadable to me. I just cant stand all the mistakes and writing errors if someone rewrote this with correct sentence structure and the right words it would be 10x better id give it a full 5 stars. View More
Here I Come One Piece World !!
3 months ago

PatriarchZero: I don't know why in most one piece self insert fanfics the MC will either meet Luffy and train him or join his crew. I mean it seems like they were given a mission to help Luffy. Why not just leave the rubber man alone. I mean it's not making the story better. I don't mean to say your story is bad, it's good actually. I just don't like where it is going. Thank you for sharing your work

Here I Come One Piece World !!
3 months ago
Reading Status: C7
I was laughing my ass off for most of the novel its a very unique system where the mc isn't op AF but has some skill to backup his boasting and I would like to see how an outsider(lockheart) with his power would do in the magical world and the muggle world. Considering how the novel is going I cant wait to see awkward scenarios with lockhart and maybe even Voldemort. Im excited and this is one of the best HP Novels on this site with how its going I only hope the author continues to update. View More
Magical Me (Harry Potter)
3 months ago
can you please redo this chapter half of it seems rushed and doesn't make sense like wtf you skipped like half a story just to get him a crew you should make their interactions longer at least. View More
The Akaiyama Pirates · C20
4 months ago
its sent not sended lol View More
Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple · C2
4 months ago

TrinityShock: Lmao i just realized that! I'm gonna edit that part out! Thx for letting me know!

Eldritch Shop System · C67
4 months ago
I love this novel but you made a mistake at the end if ginseng couldn't understand the pigs why did she at the end its gonna bother me. View More
Eldritch Shop System · C67
4 months ago
what happened to this chapter theirs so many mistakes compared to the previous ones its barely readable, can you either get someone to correct it or spend more time fixing it up. View More
True Vampire in Teen Wolf · C37
5 months ago

dhmhtrhs: Turn ethereal and slow time should have being the first shouts that he would learn. What op characters fear is getting sealed or getting crowed controlled. Jon also got cocky and never used the Ice Form shout that that i think he already knows and its a lot better that Unrelenting Force. Well some setbacks are good.

Dragonborn Saga · C330
6 months ago

morghon78: Can't he become ethereal though? And where's the bloodskal effect? Also, thought he would be faster with all the cultivation? Feels like he's standing around and not using his sword or greed much.

Dragonborn Saga · C330
6 months ago

Grieve: Damn I could understand the huge guy taking Wulphric’s shout but also Jon’s? With seemingly no injury as he was able to save his brother in the end

Dragonborn Saga · C330
6 months ago
Reading Status: C331
I understand you need to make challenges for the character but Jon dare losing to two forsworn is ridiculous hes a cultivator and he loses to some nobody that should have died from a single slap from him its not like hes immune to damage and if he did lose than Wulfur shouldnt have escaped to begin with its a very upsetting chapter to see the character you are rooting for lose to somethin as stupid as this plus he pushed the giant who he could have used as a shield away. Not only that but where did all of his combat experience go hes been training for years but he doesnt bring help or use anything that could have helped him cmon this was badly done View More
Dragonborn Saga
6 months ago

Ryofu: you can cut the thing in two, so how he decided to plan A then if the plan don't go well, you can display his have hidden plan B. Cannot work on every single action taken but can be interesting.
Also, if you want to hide his plan you must let some info in the chapter. For example, if you want him to do, have hidden cart, they must be told somewhere, like if he got a tailed beast in captivity before making him reveal it on the battlefield.

Hiding completely something is not good since it will look like plot armor (can work one time, but not many or it will lose its impact).

In Naruto as Orochimaru with a System (Reboot) · C7
6 months ago
Reading Status: C5
I loved everything about the novel but when he goes around telling people his abilities and he's reincarnated when he barely knows them even if they are his parents. You are in a world where people have superpowers and ppl get experimented on and ur best idea is telling ppl what u can do seems stupid af I stopped reading it after that. I hate stories that allow the mc to act like a moron. View More
[DROPED]In Marvel With Random Power System
6 months ago
Reading Status: C9
Dope story and I like how this peter is a bit more selfish and realistic than the normal one where he goes to school even though hes a genius I just think he got screwed by Tony stark though he could of made a lot more than 20 million but I guess since he doesnt have the connections it makes sense but he already had a million and thats more than enough to start off I guess you can argue that the money cant be used but if it took him one day to make that much Im sure he could have come up with a legal way to make money I just wish he didn't sell out so fast before even trying especially since he didn't take up his offer to work for Tony I feel like the author is rushing this story a little too much for my comfort he could be training or working on side projects instead of rushing forward through the plot. Now that he has a company and money hes going to get a lot more attention from Shield and criminals not including his old friends and family might become suspicious.He should be using his knowledge to gain contacts with heroes before their heroes or even villains to make the company better and actually do some good instead of selling his research that is actually very versatile on top of that if he uses the webs-lingers now people might link the two identities together. View More
Spiderman World of Heroes
6 months ago
I think you should do all of the above he should stay in Konoha as well as copying as much as he can without being caught and use the events in the future to his advantage while trying to play akatsuki into his favor I also think this should be a multicross novel after all the events play out maybe him becoming so powerful and immortal that he decides hes learnt everything he could so he travels to new universes being the villian and taking and researching anything that intrests him maybe some of orochimaru's memories influence him to be more pragmatic and crazier to research everything along with his intelligence to outplay people who he has knowledge of. because if the original knew all that he knew he would be op af already View More
In Naruto as Orochimaru with a System (Reboot) · C5
6 months ago

TheKris: Man's not hot, but charmeleon is

Pokemon - Adventure · C18
6 months ago

Anume: I like how you actually listen and pay attention to the good constructive criticism. You didn't have to add and fix it but glad you did. It helped flesh out the story a bit more.
I haven't seen anyone really do it yet but eventually you'll get someone saying dumb stuff on here, don't let it discourage you. Your writing is great.

Pokemon - Adventure · C18
6 months ago

Moxie: Alright, fixed

Pokemon - Adventure · C18
6 months ago
Reading Status: C18
Great story and nice author perfect for a new story. Im looking forward to reading this theirs always room for another system/pokemon fanfic. View More
Pokemon - Adventure
6 months ago

Moxie: I’ll try to fix that. Come in in about ten minutes and re-read that part if u can

Pokemon - Adventure · C18
6 months ago
I really like this story so far, but I feel like you rushed this chapter you didnt go into detail about how Red found about how the mc took care of team rocket or explain to Red that telling everyone is a bad idea. View More
Pokemon - Adventure · C18
6 months ago
I dont like this chapter I understand he needs enemies but cmon how does he go from badass understanding everything to goku levels of idiot and the fact that none of his artifacts helped him just shows how useless they all are in a real battle if this was me I would **** the artifacts for all their memories or get rid of them if they dont want them to be their master they can live in someone elses body this novel has a lot of potential but when someone is more op than someone who can literally do anything than its getting a bit ridiculous he should at least dealt damage to the god especially if he didnt know what he was dealing with and being arrogant it should have been a grand battle and he shouldve barely escaped if anything I just dont like the fact that he seems to lose so easily. View More
The Strongest Saiyan God (An ATG Fanfic) · C56
7 months ago
It did im a bit happier knowing that hes not setting himself up for failure and I hope he continues to hide most of his powers at least I really liked the idea of his blood not being useable solves that issue as well. The main issue I had with working with shield was hydra but if ur not going to add them im curious who the main villains are but ill wait til you get there no more spoilers please :P View More

CalmBerserker: First off, he's not 'kissing ass' as you put, he's being respectful to people who put their lives on the line for the world. Being polite isn't a bad thing either. Plus, they're his teachers, are you disrespectful to your teachers when you've done something wrong? Probably not.

He's had a month (and a half) to go over the plots of multiple different movies and multiple different comics, sure I haven't said anything about it, but I was thinking maybe some people would assume he would do that. By looking over the comics, he's realized he really likes how Ben Grimm is and even idolizes him because it can be linked to his own situation - as in, he has to be strong and push through the trouble of his own life e.g. not having any memories about himself.

He's 15. Literally said that in the Prologue when he talked about how he got to customize his new body.

He's not going to train with children. If you'd let me get to the end of this mini-Arc before question everything, you'd know the plan is to have one of the four teachers train a group of 3 people, AND then they will be taken on missions as superhero interns. I have something planned for Technology as well, seeing as you could probably guess he's gonna get taught by Ben Grimm and who does that give him access to? Reed Richards.

I haven't said it yet but I'm getting rid of the HYDRA Infested S.H.I.E.L.D as it's 1. Too much effort to write about and I don't think I'm a good enough writer to do it properly, and 2. I personally think it's a bit of an ass pull that they wanted us to think that Nick Fury, or even Natasha wouldn't realize that HYDRA had spies in S.H.I.E.L.D.

Anyway, I hope that has helped ease your worries somewhat and also placated your disappointment. Thanks for reading!

Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C15
7 months ago

CalmBerserker: First off, he's not 'kissing ass' as you put, he's being respectful to people who put their lives on the line for the world. Being polite isn't a bad thing either. Plus, they're his teachers, are you disrespectful to your teachers when you've done something wrong? Probably not.

He's had a month (and a half) to go over the plots of multiple different movies and multiple different comics, sure I haven't said anything about it, but I was thinking maybe some people would assume he would do that. By looking over the comics, he's realized he really likes how Ben Grimm is and even idolizes him because it can be linked to his own situation - as in, he has to be strong and push through the trouble of his own life e.g. not having any memories about himself.

He's 15. Literally said that in the Prologue when he talked about how he got to customize his new body.

He's not going to train with children. If you'd let me get to the end of this mini-Arc before question everything, you'd know the plan is to have one of the four teachers train a group of 3 people, AND then they will be taken on missions as superhero interns. I have something planned for Technology as well, seeing as you could probably guess he's gonna get taught by Ben Grimm and who does that give him access to? Reed Richards.

I haven't said it yet but I'm getting rid of the HYDRA Infested S.H.I.E.L.D as it's 1. Too much effort to write about and I don't think I'm a good enough writer to do it properly, and 2. I personally think it's a bit of an ass pull that they wanted us to think that Nick Fury, or even Natasha wouldn't realize that HYDRA had spies in S.H.I.E.L.D.

Anyway, I hope that has helped ease your worries somewhat and also placated your disappointment. Thanks for reading!

Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C15
7 months ago
TBH this chapter was disappointing af I know he doesn't have his memories but just kissing ass to literally every hero is annoying on top of that the first couple chapters said most of his memories and all his opinions were deleted so how does he know he likes Ben when he does not even know what he likes to drink its contradicting, I can understand knowing the story because he said those memories are not deleted but idk this novel is starting to become a harem with the way its progressing. I liked every chapter up til now though and TBH the author never even said how old his current body is or why someone who could fight thor and captain america is doing more combat training with children I can understand the need for combat training but he should be doing missions and learning technology and starting up his own organization because he knows shield has hydra implants and all the issues regarding Marvel theirs a good chance the heros will turn on him View More
Reincarnated in Marvel with The Strength Force · C15
7 months ago
Reading Status: C0
Overpowered mc but I love op characters I just hope he doesn't conquer the world instantly and I hope he hides most of his magic unless he needs it. Also in my opinion since he is so strong this novel will be really short he might as well build up a strong enough empire to start conquering the multiverse maybe Harry potter or even skyrim would be cool mostly in my opinion. View More
Game of Thrones: the king of conquest
7 months ago
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