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ch 0 6 what's red that move up and down, a tomato in an elevator.
MAN OF CULTURE IN THE MULTIVERSE
Anime & Comics 路 NormalAuthor
Well, I can no longer tolerate this novel Please put a romantic mark in your novel馃様馃様馃様
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HxH: Researcher
Anime & Comics 路 VQuintessence
I will give this novel a chance only ten chapters, usually I will not give a chance, but there is no good novel these days, and if any, it will stop most of the time.馃槕馃槕馃槕
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HxH: Researcher
Anime & Comics 路 VQuintessence
It seems that you did not understand my purpose. My intention is that if you are eating a fish feast means that there are many types on the table and every fish is more delicious than the previous one and you are eating half of what is served from the fish feast and then your friend comes to you and carries fried chicken with him so that you eat it in your opinion Is this the time for fried chicken?
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HxH: Researcher
Anime & Comics 路 VQuintessence
Look, I liked your novel, I was following you from the second chapter, my problem is now is not the time for romance. I am waiting for a fight that displays all the strength of the protagonist and you have been excited by all his preparations for adventure and fighting with the users of Nin, then with all these preparations you have added romance, see I will give an example As if you offered me a delicious fish feast and I eat it with pleasure, then suddenly you presented me fried chicken while I still eat fish. In your opinion, this is fried chicken time of course not, like romance at that time wrong
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HxH: Researcher
Anime & Comics 路 VQuintessence
Thank you for writing this novel, but I will say goodbye. The reason is, will he benefit from it? Of course, nothing will benefit from it, or look if I am in the real world. Perhaps I will accept it, but he is in a fictional world and he will go to the dark continent. Why is romance now? This is wrong if I were I made him go to the Dark Continent and then bring romance. This is better because now he must prepare himself for this trip, not to pick up girls, and also why his consciousness went away when he saw her. Is he not from the family of murderers? He is now a shame on this family
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HxH: Researcher
Anime & Comics 路 VQuintessence
I like the personality that enjoys the mind and does not have mercy on the enemies and does not have a lust for women that cannot be controlled and does not have a stupidly sacrificing personality, for example a person sacrificing his happiness, pride, wealth, and fatigue to a girl he does not know personally, but the owner of the previous body knew her, so he continues to pursue this girl, which is difficult Getting it is like picking up liquid gold in your hand as if she was the only beautiful girl in the universe instead of quietly developing himself for the future and then he can do whatever he wants.
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HxH: Researcher
Anime & Comics 路 VQuintessence
In fact, I do not hide anything from you, romance novels have become despised because they are copy and paste, for example the protagonist falls in love at first sight, and the scenario is also the same thing in all novels, so I have a feeling of disgust with all the romantic novels that follow the same steps. In fact, this chapter does not follow the novels The romance that is copied, but I got angry when I saw that there is romance in your novel, I know that I do not have the right to criticize you because I hate romance that does not follow logic, but I loved your novel and I wish you good luck
ch 41 Kisame
Naruto: the cat shinobi
Anime & Comics 路 Monkkey97
I want to understand how to develop feelings. Is in one month you can love someone through this short time? The answer is No, only if there was some logic your novel would have been great, but you smashed it with logic that no person with a mind could accept
ch 41 Kisame
Naruto: the cat shinobi
Anime & Comics 路 Monkkey97
In fact, there is no need to transfer the protagonist now because it is too early and also there is no benefit from the new world
ch 0 7 Chapter 7
Start by Becoming Strong with Multiverse System
Anime & Comics 路 Zer0_Sense1