What is wrong with this author? That doesn't even make sense.
The hyena queen had the right to eat first. She started eating from the male hyena's soft anus. When she was enjoying her food, she even stuffed her entire head in!
Sci-fi · Demon Cat
Please read your own writing. There are too many mistakes. "like you what you said ."
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Book&Literature · kandepi2
Ten thousand? *one thousand
When Ye Bei had consumed the entire Giant Eagle, his evolution points increased by an impressive ten thousand. At the same time, he clearly felt that his physical fitness had improved tremendously again. However, his length and girth remained unchanged.
Urban · Gaze Through the Winter Water
Conveniently forgot about the divination.
"Professor... I.... I never told you one thing." Chris said, frowning. "I usually have some dreams... they're always clear like your memories... I see myself standing there but no one hears me or sees me... and they're all related to the Hogwarts founders."
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
*funeral x3 It only takes a minute to use a spellchecker author.
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Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
*existence
"Can you at least give me a hint? About my existents? I mean who am I?" Chris asked.
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
I think it should be: *it took a while for Chris to wrap her head around this whole thing.* I have never heard it said the way you did it. Also I have noticed some other things, anyways it could do with a re-read and edit. Just my thoughts.
It had been a month since Professor Minerva McGonagall of Hogwarts informed the Nortons that Christina was a witch. At first, Chris and her father were very sceptical but then Minerva McGonagall showed them real magic and Mr Norton was over the moon. It took a while to Chris to wrap this whole thing around her head but at the end, she realised that deep down she knew something wasn't right with her. Now it was official that she wasn't normal. She was a witch. She wanted to do and learn magic right away but the first instruction from Professor McGonagall was, "Do not try to do magic outside of school. After the admission, underage students are forbidden to use magic outside. You could get expelled if you intentionally use magic at home in front of Muggles."
Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake
*assassination
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Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
This is weak writing author. They kidnap him, tie him up, and torture him all so he will willingly hand over a necklace instead of just taking it?
"Fuck! Why aren't you giving up that necklace! What's so important about it that you would endure all this torture?" Nathan screamed as he punched Moby in the face.
Fantasy · Drip
Author once again you have messed up the stats. Strength already at 20 in chapter 182. Please keep track of your writing.
ch 233 Battle for points
Fantasy · JKSManga
The point is they are both hyenas it is illogical that her entire head fits in. Also the author repeatedly brings up animal butts. To me it hasn't been done in a humors way like ISSTH, but more weird and unnecessary.
The hyena queen had the right to eat first. She started eating from the male hyena's soft anus. When she was enjoying her food, she even stuffed her entire head in!
I Became A Mighty Lion
Sci-fi · Demon Cat