buddy's trying to figure life out cause no one else will teach him. Slime Girl and the Drake are prob the only ones who can converse on a deep level
Noah didn't expect anyone to have the answer. It wasn't really a question for them. It was just something that needed to leave his thoughts, to take form in words so that he could bury it properly later.
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almost as if he*
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seeked-> sought* seeked isn't a word, pretty sure
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after being denied Noah's blood* I feel like the "to have" us kinda useless in this context
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"smear the queer" is what my buddies called a similar game when we used to wrestle. Super fun if u dont mind getting pushed around and thrown into padded walls.
They called out and the golgari cheered when they saw them coming. Before too long, they had a few small games going, blade light flashing as the balls bounced to and fro. Rather than a proper game of Tunnel Ball, it was almost as if they were playing an elaborate game of keepaway, as those without the ball tried to seize it, while those in possession tried to pass the ball around and keep it safe.
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
Dora to all of Sabody
"HAHAHAHA! About damn time the world came to know the name DORAAAA…!"
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backspace before "cornered"*
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would only cement a cruel, agonizing death.* why you got 2 "death" parts for this sentence? I think you should stick to only one here and clean up the sentence lol
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soul was still bridged*
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well the problem-> where the problem * easy miss type/autocorrect
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