Webnovel Author: Ehtimam - Novel Collection

Well for starters if you create a story about cultivation fantasy you do need to cultivate the Main Character instead of leaving him for at low level without making him cultivate and become stronger for most of the first 150 ish chapter. That's ridiculous and not necessary. You may call it character development to fancy a little bit but that is not character development but sloppy writing. What is the point of that organised tournament so early in the series?? It would've been so much fun if the MC is powerful but instead you just provide him with unnecessary materials that make him look weak.

After reading 200 chapters I finally feel that the author just doesn't know what he is doing and he doesn't have a clear future plan. First let's talk about MC. Although MC is interoduced as a lucky dog and the whole system business is also great Author reluctantly didn't improved MCs's strength for at least 100 chapters or so. I don't get it why MC needs to be weak. So for 100 or so chapters MC did nothing but host a big event. That event is also questionable cause I don't know the reason why the inn got so many popularity all of a sudden. On a second thought the story was great before that long event. Also I get it that MC is cautious but the outright mistakes he made although the author backed that up saying he has brain tumor.Anyway my whole point is if you are so reluctant to make the MC even fight why not make him a saitama type MC who is already super strong. That way we don't need to see MC is simping or things like this.

If you copied the plot point what's the reason people gonna read another TLM. What I am saying is that you used TLM's world building. TLM has a great world building to this day. Everything about that series comes from its world building.

Carbon copy of the legendary Mechanic series. Same world building, same starting. Basically a medieval world while the legendary Mechanic started in an urban world. Anyway if it's good like TLM then I have no complaints.

Thank You.

Shameless Author here. So I wanted to write a novel about an OP MC who is not a giant pain in the ass. For plot I have seen a lot of MC don't use their full strength. They can use space ability but it's only used for running away or traveling. When it comes to actual fighting they just the space ability is never used properly. This is just one example there are multiple like this. So I wanted to change that thing. My point is when you play a game you can defeat a boss at least 20 level higher than you. The same goes for real life. There are possibilities to defeat strong opponents who are twice the time strongest then you. So I am going to implement it. But not in a bullshit way like MC has a hidden power that he can't control when it goes out of his hand, no never. You will see if you read through chapter 6 so stay tuned. I have grammar issues, I guess it will fix if I write a more. So be notify me when you saw any errors. Also I don't know if you readers are liking this novel or not. So please leave your review and comment if you are reading it. Thank You.

This is my first webnovel. I enjoyed it very much. This is also a novel that uses Romance tags properly. Instead of having 4 women harem Yi Yun is devoted to only one woman for his entire life. A true absolute chad.