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AridasWolf

AridasWolf

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A novice writer willing to swallow her pride and fears to tell her story(s) as she wallows in her own self-doubt in her place in this world.

2018-09-01 Joined Canada

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Oh boy, where to start... Capitalize important places, use ctrl+alt+num- after "there's Ray" Turning it into "there's Ray—an 18 years old...blah blah." Do not overuse the " 's" as it sounds lazy. this is the first paragraph. Heck, even my grammar program is having a hay day. if you ever get on how to word something, look in books or others content. Or shove out $380 (estimated) for Grammarly. It will train you.
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