I think mc brain are broken, he level up many times already, but didnt even put the stats he gained, then got hard in fight, and act arrogant, as if he was on the win side like he can kill them anytime he want(but, mc was weak as chicken..
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Did mc obsessed with 5 million or what? He waste 2 wish for only 5 million? Why not billion? Or 9*100? Or unlimited points? He knows about system on others novels, don't he know that there are items more than 5 million point to buy? If he want to get stronger faster, why not wish for half effort for 2x/3x/4x/100x/999*999 times exp? And mc waste his wish to get only 2 system? Anime system and cultivation system? That's 2 wish? You know he can wish to get all type system. Huh. That's it. Don't mind what I said, just throw out my thought for mc.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1:The start of the Legend
Action · Marchen
Mc asking those hunter their abilities, and they tell him, But when they ask him about his ability. Mc don't tell them, and they just nodded. Yea, those hunters really are stupid.
ch 14 Healing Pill - Recovery Triangle - Chapter 14
Anime & Comics · Krizantem
Yea, maybe those hunter really stupid.
ch 13 Friends Of Alisa - Chapter 13
Anime & Comics · Krizantem
1 more thing. mc tell Alisa that he know nothing of the past? After that he train nen with no memories? Then with all those thing he does, that already show that mc lied to Alisa. Did those hunter stupid ?
ch 13 Friends Of Alisa - Chapter 13
Anime & Comics · Krizantem
Everytime mc want to think, he closed his eyes? What? Even when fighting, the enemy in front of him, when he want to think of strategy, he closed his eyes? What's wrong with mc? When he want to check information about alisa, she's still in front of him and still talking, but, mc still close his eyes to check the info? Tsk. And , is mc stupid or what? He has knowledge about HxH from earth. Then why would he go to exposed Alisa? Mc are too weak. Did he not think she would kill him after she got exposed? After he said that, he smiled? Tfk? Tsk. He comes from earth, right? Then why, he use technology of HxH? Of course when training nen he need to use knowledge from HxH, but when fighting or creating ability, did he need to follow HxH? Ugh.
ch 11 Injured - Plants - Pill - Chapter 11
Anime & Comics · Krizantem
Its pretty good. But. Why mc want to have limitation to his nen ability? Just because he don't want it to become something like he can toy it with anything? Does he don't want to create anything he want with it? Mc has system, it clearly said that he can create any ability. But mc said he don't want it, he want to have a limit? Tsk. If that the case, better throw the system aside.
ch 0 8 Specialist - Chapter 8
Anime & Comics · Krizantem
Mc comes from earth. Then why did he still associated himself with ninja that ninja this with everything? Soo stupid. If everything he does was to compare with ninja, then what about knowledge from earth? Nothing. Waste. He said he was an otaku. But all he does was to compare with ninja. Tsk. Then all those anime other than ninja? There's a lot of anime that stronger than naruto. Wasting all those nen to compare with ninja. Shit.
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 : Training
Anime & Comics · Otaku_king
Again, why the fking stupid mc feels that it too much power for the world just for the fcking creating some money? And, Did mc got stupid or what? Those years, he never went to visit his family. And, why would he still need to stay in konoha? He said that he already had connection to konoha, just because they took him when he was a child? Stupid or what? He can just alter their memories, or just ignore them, then go to the place he created. He said that he was thousands year. But what happen? Huh,, mc way of doing thing is so stupid.
ch 192 Chapter 191: 4th Great War Start
Anime & Comics · southgamez
I really don't understand, why would author need to make mc take lin fan system? Did lin fan system stronger than his system?? Not. right? Then why? Did it necessary for soren to take it to save the world? To breakthrough to heavenly lord realm? Too stupid. Mc has lottery, The last time he use lottery when he was on one piece world, after that, he never use any, even though he has a lot of system point. There's a lot of things he can get from lottery, but he buy the things that he can cheaply get from lottery for those expensive things in mall? And, on mall, there's a lot of item he can buy , buy he only buy senzu beans? Tsk. And then buy building? Shit. What the heck? He got creation magic, but he only create those useless thing, mountain then building. Tsk tsk,, soo stupid. He can create storage ring. Don't he even think to create those treasures? When he worried about economy of those world, then why he not worried about those wish treasures disrupted economy of those world? Ughh. Waste. He got a lot skills ,, but never ever take advantage of them. Mc only use it for useless things.
ch 182 Chapter 181: Mainland Invasion Start
Anime & Comics · southgamez
And 1 more. Why author make mc telling every possible way of the secret he has to others? Just because he powerful? Don't he know that the strong don't need to reasons with others? Suck. Only he the only one is powerful, not his family. Too stupid. He want to go to celestial realm, leaving behind his wife and family. But he goes telling around his secret to others. Don't he think that others would attack his place? Imprisoned his family? Just because mc is powerful, author don't need to make him go around telling secret like an idiot.
ch 171 Chapter 170: Pill Spirit?
Anime & Comics · southgamez
And 1 more thing. Whu would author makes killua and gon follow mc buying saiyan bloodline?? Dude, killua is lightning shit. If he buy other bloodline, it would be better for his growth. If you want to make sub system. Just don't force other character to follow what mc already have. Tsk. And , what about saiyan bloodline? Did other bloodline mc have weaker than saiyan? Why would his children only inherit saiyan bloodline while mc has a lot of bloodline? Ughh. Too stupid. System/Sakura. When mc were apologising to her for making her angry and sulking. Mc want to treat her better after that. But what happen next? Mc don't even chat with her. Only checking status, tsk.
ch 126 Chapter 125: Enter Soren… Exit Soren
Anime & Comics · southgamez
I think this novel would become a waste then. It would be better if soren just make do with his harem going around travel, not having child or leaving the child to his family, and not bring someone else other than his harem. And the story would be boring then. Cuz, mc make a wish for sub system, and giving them to his friend child and someone else. If his harem, its okay. But others , suck. Cuz, when he goes to other world. He won't need to fight, he can just send his friend or child to fight cuz they have system and needs system point. then how can he become stronger? If you want to a reference about harem and having a child, make do with The Divine Anime System. It's story is pretty good on middle and later chapter. And, it's stupid for author to make mc that emotional you know. He vow that, if his family and friend don't want immortality, he can just end his life with them and die with them? Tsk. And , later story, because author bring all those people with mc to other world, his family just become a background character. At first, it's pretty good with mc and misha. But after mc goes back to his Hunter x Hunter world and make a children, it's became boring. And it's like they don't even exist. And yea, mc goes to other world. But why did he goes to the world that weak for him? Wasting system power. And boring story. Cuz mc just go there, and watch other fight, if mc fight, it will judt like a sneeze to him. Stupid. And what would happen if mc go to the world that stronger than him? What happen to his family then? When mc goes around fighting those stronger than him, and the enemies that a lot of stronger than him caught his family? what would mc do? That's why it stupid for this story to have a children and bring them around to other world. And why would mc change his original world to world of fantasy? Too waste. 3 wish, mc just let the world change? Tsk. The original world is much better than what he had changed. Huh. 2 wish is enough for earth, 1: revert it back to before it's destruction, 2: revive those human. If it like this, it would be a better place for his family to make a living. If mc has children, just put them on earth with his harem. Then create a place at mountain area, create whatever author like for better place for living. And for the last wish, just change the timeframe on earth. Then, mc can just go travel around without worrying for his family on earth. It's that simple. Ughh.
ch 125 Chapter 124: Enter Goku!
Anime & Comics · southgamez
mc got 54 stats right????? then what the heck did mc only use 24 free stats?? where's the other 30 free stats? mc want to get stronger faster, but, all he did was wasting time, even the stats didnt fully use. then, what use of the remaining free stats for, giving to other players? what? stupid mc.