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Rival789

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2019-12-07 Joined Global

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The author REALLY needs to look over his writing before posting. The author can't seem to remember that male characters use he/his/him and female characters use she/her/hers, it is constantly switching back and forth between the two. Once or twice would be a mistake, at this point, it almost feels malicious with how often it happens. The MC comes across as a one-dimensional cringey edge lord and is really hard to like him.

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