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I was woken by an truely heinous amount of pain radiating from my shoulder as I tried to sit up and take in my surroundings…key word there was tried as my body refused to move..
Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto
Anime & Comics · Love_dem_fanfix
the body condom thing includes the mouth as well? Not sure how that would work
He kissed her on her stomach and made his way upwards to her chest, then her shoulders, her neck, her ears, cheeks, and finally, a deep kiss on her mouth.
Ultimate Marvel System
Anime & Comics · Imbreak
Funny enough, they may do just that if they need to amputate above the knee.
In those 5 seconds, all of my senses came back to me, the cold, hard ground below me, the color of murky green walls being the only thing I could see in those 5 seconds, the sound of a TV blasting my hears, the smell of beer, rotten food, and dirty clothes filling nose, and the taste of blood inside my mouth.
Survival of a Loner MARVEL
Anime & Comics · daoistofeverything
I've seen this a couple of times by now, but "rouge"=red, you meant "rogue".
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Naruto: The Blind Swordsman
Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
"overlooked" = not realized "oversaw" = was responsible for, like "I oversaw the project"
An essential factor that Sakura oversaw was that while Yuna used a huge sword to fight Itachi, Itachi was only using two kunai. That means, that Yuna could keep up with Itachi, despite using a significantly slower weapon than him, so she was either even faster than him, or her skill was superior. As far as Chiyo could judge, it was the second case.
Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]
Anime & Comics · Maerry
Not sure if he was ever confirmed as a jew, some concentration camps also had others such as gypsies and such and MARVEL would rather leave it ambiguous than antagonize large groups of people by making a "villain" 100% jew.
"I have lived a troubled life and felt the true cruelty of mankind, not only as a mutant but also as a Jew as well. When I was only a child, I was forced to watch as my people suffered under the horrors inflicted by the Nazis. I was filled with hatred and anger, mainly toward a certain Nazi scientist named Sebastian Shaw. Shaw murdered my mother before my very eyes and forced me to experience horrendous tortures." Magneto explains.
I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
Movies · AlienWarlord
Remembered that joke about deaf people and "ear" not having "h"
In those 5 seconds, all of my senses came back to me, the cold, hard ground below me, the color of murky green walls being the only thing I could see in those 5 seconds, the sound of a TV blasting my hears, the smell of beer, rotten food, and dirty clothes filling nose, and the taste of blood inside my mouth.
Survival of a Loner MARVEL
Anime & Comics · daoistofeverything
whose is meant to be used in questions of ownership, like "whose car is this", in here it should be "who is"
I can see the worry on everyone's faces, they are worried, about whose going to win this war.
Game of Thrones: The Prideful One.
TV · CORNBRINGER
It was correct in some chapters, but the word is "lady"
We reached there castle and meet with Morton's wife who is very happy to see her husband but not very welcoming to others . We eat the bread and salt and the guest right completed and we're welcomed inside. ledy Waynwood and Morton held a feast in the in my name in the night .
Game Of Thrones: A Knight's tale.18+
TV · Kagetanehiruko
Also send is a verb with different form of past tense and that is "sent", "sended" is sometimes used but in informal cases and technically wrong.
Traveling in the road could not make me bored because of my new brilliant ascorts . Ser Alan Winters have not only one but six squires now . He had two at first but he had them knighted in Harranhall for defeating other opponents . And sended them to their house , And now he took six of them ? But what I observed that this young squires have enough strength to best even the veteran knights . And in pure sword fight my son could not defeat three of them . And that is truly impressive how much better he could traine his subordinates.
Game Of Thrones: A Knight's tale.18+
TV · Kagetanehiruko
Still a little rough, try using grammarly or something to correct the "your/you're" mistakes, especially in the second half.
ch 0 1 1 birth of a God(Re-Edited)
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
you really don't want to, but spoiler alert . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .remember the teacher that voldy kills in front of Snape during a dinner at malfoys? The one tha said wizards should reproduce with muggles?
"A Biography of Mendel: The Father of Genetics," Bubarge said with interest, "It has inspired me a lot ..."
Harry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)
Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
seriously, I've seen this before but "casted" is not a thing, the past of "cast" is "cast"
Seeing me first tensing up suddenly, then looking at the direction of the voice, and casting the silencing on both of us, Dora quickly casted a disillusionment charm on both of us without me needing to say anything. See? She's total Auror material.
HP: I Have "Pure" Magic
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
*threw Not every verb in past form ends with "ed", not really angry just a coment because this is like the fourth time I see this kind of mistake.
He made one big hole to bury them all in. Walking to Akira, Kentaro carried Akira and throwed him in the hole.
The Shinobi With The Straw Hat
Anime & Comics · LanceVance
*threw
At this moment, Daichi throwed two kunai's in Akira's eyes. Such precision!
The Shinobi With The Straw Hat
Anime & Comics · LanceVance
*stuck
Directing his Chakra to his feet, Kentaro placed his right foot on the tree, it was as if he was sticked. Doing the same with his left foot, Kentaro began walking on the tree.
The Shinobi With The Straw Hat
Anime & Comics · LanceVance
unconscious*
When he took Hinata from Konoha three years ago, he forgot to ask them for their traditional techniques. Not that they would give it to him. Hiashi was unconscientious and the elders would never agree to give their enemies a way to find their weaknesses.
In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.
Anime & Comics · Crystal_Cat
You got one right and one wrong in here and it seems to be a mistake I've seen previously as well.
I have gotten quite skilled at using a sword but not quite at Chaku's level even with shadow clones. He told me not to worry about it and that you get way more training and experience by using it on the battlefield. Thats where I am going right now we are going to attack the suna camp immediately even though they might know by now we are attacking them they might not know because in our camp the others got word today in the morning that we are attacking Suna camp and only the jounin knew sience a week ago and me who is a jounin in all but name. I also have the sword jounins sword in my back it was a chakra metal sword that lets you chanel chakra easier in it. It is good becouse I have a short reach because of my age.
Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
past of pay is paid*
"Alright first things first, I only took you in to repay the favour when you patched me up at the orphanage, and I consider that payed, you're gonna have to stay here for a good 6-8 months before I can let you leave though…"
Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto
Anime & Comics · Love_dem_fanfix