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I want to like it but it feels like it's AI generated. The entire first chapter feels mechanical, not a stilted kind of writing style but literally written by a machine. No one talks like in the US. Saying people's full name in conversation, what makes it worse is that it's supposed to be a conversation between family. I'm hoping it's just a bad translation and that the story was written by a Chinese writer pretending to know how things are done in the US.

I'm still not sure when they made a bond. I thought he just brought the worm home but never made a contract. Did I just accidentally skip past it while reading?

Makes sense. Water, wood or sunlight. Sunlight power seems like it could make things interesting

Jesus christ. If it wasn't for the high reviews I would've stopped reading at this chapter. There's no way his flaw is being changed to "must answer all questions with the truth" instead of "can not lie" because one is bearable to read and the other would make this story into complete garbage. Please buddah, have the MC just keep his mouth shut.

So surivial is less important then questioning one traitor out of hundreds, thousands and maybe millions more he can find.

This was a bit much. It has passed the point of being funny into the realm of utter garbage. Just how many times is watching someone slip on a banana peel funny? So author decided to change it into slipping on a banana and breaking both legs to make it funnier? Garbage chapter.

So did being reborn turn him into a kid mentally? Because he's acting like a literal 10 year old trying to lie about not eating the cookie.

Is this going to be an occuring theme in this story? Try to kill me and I'll let you leave alive?

I'd rather not get known as a beta player and get hunted down by millions of people when the worlds combine. Especially if I have a little sister that I love and I'm trying to protect. He somehow knows they aren't going to talk about this in the forums? Not tell other people? He was a slave and lived a horrendous life but suddenly his life experience is thrown away and the author turns him into an idiot.

This is what happens when an idiot that's never played games decides to write a gaming novel.

Makes you feel like Chinese players are a different breed everytime I read these gaming stories. I've been a gaming nerd my whole life and never encountered this. Only when you f up in a competitive game have I heard and read so much trash talking, otherwise you literally get ignored or ignore everyone else.

I can see someone is a fan of Lord of the Mysteries. The problem is the author has to be smart to pull off a Trickster type character and so far all I'm seeing is the story would've been better if it was titled God of Idiots instead. Adding that elite girl as a love interest also lowered alot of good points the story could've had even further. If the author actually paid attention when he read Lord of The Mysteries, he would know that the fact that the MC didn't get a love interest in the first 10 chapters was a reason people loved it.