Fresh Author, looking to gain insight into the craft and improve my writing.
2018-09-07 Joined Global
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ch 78 Against The Undead Hero!
Fantasy 路 PancakesWitch
you gave him a house, but you couldn't give him a spell... you act like you're not the one writing this
ch 15 Mage vs. Knight
Fantasy 路 Hateful_Fellow
Just wanted you to personally read my feedback. deleted after. You're a great writer, and I'm personally a nobody with cash. I just gave you my opinion. You have dedication and talent. Thank You
ch 78 Against The Undead Hero!
Fantasy 路 PancakesWitch
I swore this book said no romance
ch 23 After Thoughts
Fantasy 路 PancakesWitch
what should I write about
I kept reading, it got worse.
keep reading
"Pokemon is awesome," Jyorta mumbled in a daze, regaining his senses to find a boy looking at him. The boy looked slightly mature, sporting wide facial features on his tall body frame, almost half a head taller than Jyorta.
Sci-fi 路 Overlord_Venus
I expected better writing
The Liches Diary
"Deal with it," Doevm opened the door and shoved Thomas out. "And don't do this again." He slammed the door and went back to bed, having experienced another burst of fatigue. 'I think I'm still a little angry, not that I would know.' He shut his eyes and replayed the events of the past few hours. 'What book was it? Which one did he steal?'
Fantasy 路 Random_writer
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE BACKFLIPS???
She stopped the lullaby. Doevm laid down and pretended to be asleep, all while creaking his eye open. Through the doorway was Hank's body. Not only was his throat slit, but he was also stabbed numerous times. One of his arms had been sawed off. The blood-covered Rena walked to Doevm's side.
Fantasy 路 Random_writer
YOOO I THOUGHT THIS WAS A COMEDY!!!
A loud clunk and squishing sounded out, like a board being sawed in two. "She'll. Wait. For. The. Earth. To. Darken."
Fantasy 路 Random_writer
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy 路 DiceVR
trash
The Lord Is Too Overbearing
Fantasy 路 Frona_Gorgophone