David isn't very bright is he...
"What was that for?" David said as he glared at the pot belled man before him.
Sci-fi · Typhlix
Get it... Other hand.
It instead focused on a minor risk to benefit analysis for now. So far, aside from the anomalous patterns of magical energy that could be the base of some kind of spell, there were no threats. The benefits of devouring the Jotnar hand were enormous, on the other hand.
Fantasy · John_Doever
thx for the reply, loving the story. If I seemed annoyed that was not my intent. I just felt there should have been more tension between Chaos and the Orcs.
ch 21 What a Handsome Lord!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
really, she just forgot?
"Y-Yes, of course!" said Dura. Who had quickly forgotten about her husband…
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
kinda disappointed ngl, makes all the of the orc tribes sorrow and grief completely irrelevant. It would have been interesting seeing how he manages the tribe filled with the wifes and children of the orcs he killed. I understand that this is a fighting novel but the whole 'just slap a contract and they now slaves' just seemed anticlimactic.
ch 21 What a Handsome Lord!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Take all my stones... PLUS ULTRA!
ch 98 To Vimur
Fantasy · John_Doever
it's percentage based, so the spark costed 10% of his total mana.
Mana Level: 90>80
Fantasy · John_Doever
shut up and take my stones!
ch 73 Spoils of War
Fantasy · John_Doever
So... he's a respected leader, because he's respected? it's unnecessary to put respected twice, pick one or the other. then you can give an action later on in the story which shows how's his respected nature. or you could've added some backstory here eg" As one of the few retainers of the King that have gained his nobledom through exemplary service during the such and such war. he is respected by all who live in his domain.
Earl Blaire was not just a peerless expert of Schild City, he was also a respected leader which was the reason why the citizens of Schild City respect him so much.
Fantasy · Ichiryuu
why are there no character limits...
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Fantasy · Legion20
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 I Am The Imposter
Sci-fi · Pill_Guy
Spellings and formatting :/ There vs their, One is for a place, the other a person. That place over there. That person has their purse.
ch 0 3 Ch.3 Escape
Dragon's Throne : Rise of Dragons
Fantasy · Mindviper81