SkarKrow

Ryan and Professor Kal both turned to look at their four companions. Laura, Ben, and Richard were all staring on silently, Laura had seen the devil worm before on that horrible night she wished she could forget forever, Ben had been told by Ryan about its existence, and Richard, as quiet as always, stared on with wide eyes. Professor Treffle on the other hand, was very vocal in her astonishment.

Professor Kal

Fantasy · Mungknut

SkarKrow

2yr

Commented

Where's Richard? I thought Ben, Laura, Ryan and Richard came. Pretty sure Kal even makes Richard and Laura set up tent.

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Professor Kal

Fantasy · Mungknut

SkarKrow

3yr

Posted

Not much to say, just want the book to get picked. There's just too little to criticise or praise. It seems good if you like the concept of this book.

I Just Won't Play By The Book

Eastern · 7 Percent

SkarKrow

3yr

Commented

Scars is a plural form of the word scar, so you have to use plural forms of verbs in conjubction with it. I suggest you put your chapter onto a grammar checker like grammarly, so you can see if there are any grammar mistakes and correct them. Sometimes it might highlight things that aren't mistakes though.

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