shaper --> sharper
Frost not being one to behave passively responded in a similar fashion. Wisps of cold fire formed around his body, lowering the surrounding temperature while his own aura clashed against Indra's, refusing to cower from the provocation. From the initial tests the two of them were roughly on par, neither gained any ground over the other despite their difference in makeup. Frost's was heavier, denser and more defensive in nature while Indra's aura was shaper, more destructive and better suited to relentless aggression.
Fantasy · Sword_immortal1
town --> down
[Good work. It will take some effort to cut a road town the hill and across the other side, but we can do that easily enough with all of us. As long as that other bridge is as good as it looks, we should he home in time for lunch.]
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
consolidating --> consulting
Immortal Knight, the Untamed Army, and all members of the Untamed Awakened continued to work hard. They grew stronger and attended the monthly championships that Rebecca Zauber had initiated after consolidating Michael thoroughly. The championship winners were given a large number of Jungle Points that could be used to purchase Spirit Armaments, Artifacts, Soultraits, and a wide variety of other stuff.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Wolfe --> Karl
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Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
earing --> hearing
Even though I had almost a photographic memory, my memory of earing was falling behind a little.
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Awakeend's --> Awakened's
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Fantasy · HideousGrain
Haha, fair enough!
They all stared at Rui like he was an alien that landed from outer space. Their stares were wide-eyed, their silence was loud, and they naturally parted ways for Rui as he walked through the crowd.
Action · Lord_Streak
The original paragraph said "They all stared at Ves ..." are you Exlor, the author of "The Mech Touch" using a different account?
They all stared at Rui like he was an alien that landed from outer space. Their stares were wide-eyed, their silence was loud, and they naturally parted ways for Rui as he walked through the crowd.
Action · Lord_Streak
little greater --> little slower
Abandoning a guard and haphazardly dashing for a takedown mid-strike was a very dangerous thing to. He could have easily been knocked out, or he could have completely avoided the strike if he was skilled and experienced, the only reason the strike didn't knock him out was because Fae had been caught off-guard, thus her reaction time was a little greater than normal, she wasn't able to adjust the trajectory to strike him in time.
Action · Lord_Streak
become be --> be
"Father said that if I didn't get into the top five, my play time would become be replaced with more training. So I just barely made the cut." He replied with a tinge of relief and defiance.
Action · Lord_Streak
heat of --> heat off
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Fantasy · Warmaisach
Ravensein --> Ravenstein
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Fantasy · RealmWeaver
infiltrate --> infiltrated
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Fantasy · RealmWeaver
Rya --> Ryla
"Garrik!" Rya flushed in embarrassment. "This is no way to talk with friends."
Fantasy · Legion20
neck stiff --> stiff neck
"This is actually *my* home, little runt. You and your mother are my guests so be respectful with my friends." Lith caught the boy on the fly and forced him to stand still on the ground so that he wouldn't give everyone a neck stiff by trying to follow him with their eyes.
Fantasy · Legion20
Corts --> Courts
"We can't afford an internal struggle that might further reduce our numbers. The colonization of Jiera is nigh and we need to act as a united front. Any internal division would favor the Undead Corts and ruin the hard work done so far to eradicate them."
Fantasy · Legion20
attribution --> allocation
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Games · Galanar
Ok, thanks for the explanation. I didn't understand that reference.
After all, in the Endless Void, the rule followed is the Dark Forest Rule. If a World Fragment is discovered by other beings, it's most likely an inevitable battle!
Games · Gray Ashes
I have read a lot of books by this author, and I have been consistently surprised at the high level of quality. This book is no exception, and does a great job in all aspects. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain