Badges 31
Moments 1518
consolidating --> consulting
Immortal Knight, the Untamed Army, and all members of the Untamed Awakened continued to work hard. They grew stronger and attended the monthly championships that Rebecca Zauber had initiated after consolidating Michael thoroughly. The championship winners were given a large number of Jungle Points that could be used to purchase Spirit Armaments, Artifacts, Soultraits, and a wide variety of other stuff.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Wolfe --> Karl
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The First Legendary Beast Master
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
earing --> hearing
Even though I had almost a photographic memory, my memory of earing was falling behind a little.
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Awakeend's --> Awakened's
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Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Haha, fair enough!
They all stared at Rui like he was an alien that landed from outer space. Their stares were wide-eyed, their silence was loud, and they naturally parted ways for Rui as he walked through the crowd.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
The original paragraph said "They all stared at Ves ..." are you Exlor, the author of "The Mech Touch" using a different account?
They all stared at Rui like he was an alien that landed from outer space. Their stares were wide-eyed, their silence was loud, and they naturally parted ways for Rui as he walked through the crowd.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
little greater --> little slower
Abandoning a guard and haphazardly dashing for a takedown mid-strike was a very dangerous thing to. He could have easily been knocked out, or he could have completely avoided the strike if he was skilled and experienced, the only reason the strike didn't knock him out was because Fae had been caught off-guard, thus her reaction time was a little greater than normal, she wasn't able to adjust the trajectory to strike him in time.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
become be --> be
"Father said that if I didn't get into the top five, my play time would become be replaced with more training. So I just barely made the cut." He replied with a tinge of relief and defiance.
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak
heat of --> heat off
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Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Ravensein --> Ravenstein
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Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
infiltrate --> infiltrated
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Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
Rya --> Ryla
"Garrik!" Rya flushed in embarrassment. "This is no way to talk with friends."
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
neck stiff --> stiff neck
"This is actually *my* home, little runt. You and your mother are my guests so be respectful with my friends." Lith caught the boy on the fly and forced him to stand still on the ground so that he wouldn't give everyone a neck stiff by trying to follow him with their eyes.
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
Corts --> Courts
"We can't afford an internal struggle that might further reduce our numbers. The colonization of Jiera is nigh and we need to act as a united front. Any internal division would favor the Undead Corts and ruin the hard work done so far to eradicate them."
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20
attribution --> allocation
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New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar
Ok, thanks for the explanation. I didn't understand that reference.
After all, in the Endless Void, the rule followed is the Dark Forest Rule. If a World Fragment is discovered by other beings, it's most likely an inevitable battle!
Deities: Starting From Goblins
Games · Gray Ashes
ninety-six --> eighty-six. He spent 4,000 to solidify traits and 10,000 to fuse traits into the shadow hunter profession. 100 x 1000 = 100,000 100,000 - 4,000 = 96,000 96,000 - 10,000 = 86,000
"I used some just now, but I still have more than ninety-six thousand seven hundred points, enough to push the time flow speed."
Deities: Starting From Goblins
Games · Gray Ashes
ninety-six --> eighty-six.He spent 4,000 to solidify traits and 10,000 to fuse traits into the shadow hunter profession.100,000 - 4,000 = 96,00096,000 - 10,000 = 86,000
"I used some just now, but I still have more than ninety-six thousand seven hundred points, enough to push the time flow speed."
Deities: Starting From Goblins
Games · Gray Ashes
town --> down
[Good work. It will take some effort to cut a road town the hill and across the other side, but we can do that easily enough with all of us. As long as that other bridge is as good as it looks, we should he home in time for lunch.]
The First Legendary Beast Master
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku