Webnovel Author: flosvloom - Novel Collection

I'm waiting author. Do take your time tho. No rush or pressure. ❤

Writing quality for me is on peak. idk how tagalog writing goes tbh, but I like how the words flows so easily. tho i feel like there could be some improvement more if the author wrote things in a normal taglish way, so it wouldn't seem confusing. like for the age for example. character design, i cant really tell much since there is only about 3 chapters and its too short per chapter, so ill wait for more chapters and give my other reviews for other qualities. updating stability...needs a lot of work to do. world background, i feel like it lacks a a bit description on the setting. like use the five senses for example. how the blood smell, how it made him feel, how the texture feels, what the mc see. so on and on. weather and etc, clothing and appearance too. about the story development, I kinda want more exposition first before being thrown to the actual inciting incident. but im looking forward on how things will go.

Giving myself shameless review. Because why not? Writing quality is fine. Well, for me, it is. Story development is getting there. Not entirely, but the genre is about fantasy romance, so I'm still working on the romance. It's a slowburn, typical, kind of approach. The story is more concentrated on each individual's growth, but romance is there, don't worry. Character design: very stubborn naive mc with a slight character development. MC is weak and ignorant at first, but she will grow more in later chapters of the story. Or maybe in this middle. Updating stability: I'll try to update once in a week, but recently, I've been uploading loads of chapters. World Background: Not bad. It's full of magical creatures and magical realism. Magic system is a mix of both hard and soft approach. Setting is set in a mix of both modern and medieval style. I mean, the magic technology in the world is a bit similar to modern time. While the rest is similar to medieval. There are culture and all the stuff that makes the story more realistic. Does it have happy ending? Yes, it will have Happy Ending with lots of angst first.

First of all, the writing quality is great since it was really easy to read the flow of the story, and although there were a few grammatical sentences, you can still read it like a flowing water. The development of the story was slow-paced but it has a good potential. The world building was specially great and it made the whole story interesting to read. One thing that really botheres me was how the author force relationship on the protagonist... like how the relationship between Cleo and Sophie became how it was... there was no struggle or obstacle at the beginning of their relationship... and their relationship felt very superficial to me... although they both prioritized each other but with how their relationship begun... it just felt too lacking with the beginning of their relationship... on the other side, Sophie's (MC) relationship with Astrid, Qiana, and Rachel was very understandable... the four of them have that special event where they became close because of their environment and circumstances... but the author chose to separate these four and only left MC to Cleo which I think the heroine. However, I like the plot of the story.. it was interesting... but the romance was a little lacking, although, the author made sweet flirty and fluffy scenes between MC and the heroine... but still felt too lacking and it just felt like a shallow relationship... I was a little disappointed with the romance considering that it has a yuri tag.