God do I want this super badly. +1
Worm: The Lizard Daddy that Replaced Armsmaster
Book&Literature · JManM
This story is really good you have great talent as an author.
ch 36 Chapter 36
TV · Maximus_Quill
Am I the only one with '' nullb'' word at the start of almost every sentance?
ch 75 Missing Nin? Part-2
Anime & Comics · Version_401
Bro fix the names whats going on? You have decent grammar but you made bunch of misspeling errors when spelling names of characters.
A/N: What do you think about this chapter? Do you think the character interactions fit? Please let me know and as always I am always up for suggestions whether they may be what mc should do or what I should add to his arsenal.
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
Its Gacha.
2x Gatcha Token
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
So I read a few comments and there are a bunch of 4 and 5 but no reasons for why that is. So I give it a solid 3 and ill try to give my reasons for this rating. So first thing first you didnt flesh out OC characters well. I just read this chapter and forgot their names I dont care about them and they arent special in any way. Now the detective work itself is nice but while concealing a child life and death is a good move its a classic and an overused one. Im not saying here reinvent the wheel there is no need for that but this didnt feel special or unique in any way. If you want to do these kinds of things you also need to give MC extra reward for not using sysem features it is too boring for him to be able to see reputation gain decrese and it kills tension. And lastly no big enemy or somebody to fight. Even in last part of explosion you shouldnt have MC yell the jutsu for us viewers it killed the tension as well. So these are some of my reason for lowering it to 3. Now things I think you did well mystery and detective work was rly cool to see its unique in naruto setting also use of sealing in this arc is phenomenal. Introduction of several of other poison users is also nice I live the expasion of lore that you are doing in general and I feel you tied that rly nicely here. Overall not bad you are clearly getting better as an author abd im rly hyped up to see what else you come up with. Thanks for chapter.
ch 203 Chapter 203 - B Rank Mission: Conclusion
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
I dont think this recap was needed. Thanks for chapter. All you had to do was use last few sentancrs and move on.
ch 202 Chapter 202 - The Second Quest
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
Im happy youre trying someting new. But when will canon come 300 chapters in?
ch 174 Chapter 174 - The Legendary Thief
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
I dunno man you seem to be struggling hard with grammar lately.
When the hands finally Grow golden Hector in his Eidolon for mis revealed.
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
Fix the grammar this chapter god is it bad. Almost every sentance or 2 there is a missing letter wrong use of times its atrocious to read. You should just take chapter down and repost it after you beta read it.
ch 47 Extra: The Interview (Part 3)
Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
What other stories?
Calling it team kakashi seems rather arrogant to me it should be team 7
ch 152 Chapter 152 - The 2 Man Genin Team
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
This second part after timeskip feels like Pokemon novel he is just collecting characters that MC met in original.
ch 156 Chapter 156: Subduing the Lion King
Anime & Comics · Kisshot
Thanks for chapter.
ch 0 3 I Am Legend
Worm: The Lizard Daddy that Replaced Armsmaster
Book&Literature · JManM