I get the appeal of a cautious MC but this is just getting ridiculous. hopefully it will get better as I read more chapters. + one slap of the face to the author because I'm petty[img=faceslap]
ch 0 6 Oh Boy... Is It So Dangerous Even in Prestigious Sects?
Eastern · 7 Percent
this is terribly written, has no plot, is money and woman orientated plus the characters are as deep as soda bootle cup of water. maybe your other stories will be good but this is just trash. focus on character and story development more as this is just you telling us what's happening and not letting us read read it
ch 12 Business Competition
Urban · Vermillion Bird’s Solo Flight
the character and story so far feels very hollow
ch 0 4 Strengthening the Body
Urban · Vermillion Bird’s Solo Flight
I don't know how many Authors will create these very fake relationships just to have romance. At this point Kurenai is just there to boost Hiro's ego and their interactions are unrealistic and it gives the appearance as if they are spitting pre recorded line. then they is the fact that you lowered and made evey other shinobi with power just be fodder to see how great the Mc is. the story has potential but I feel like your not meeting it let alone acknowledging it. A strong MC does not mean everyone is a butterfly eater one face slap for you[img=faceslap]
ch 21 Chapter 21 Great rewards!
Anime & Comics · theTripleX_HSA
it seems I've found gold[img=recommend]
ch 0 4 Hydra on tail
Movies · Hey_Rishabh
I whole heartedly agree with this statement!
ch 0 2 Discomfort
Fantasy · NotAlpharius
How does the M.C. get progressively more stupid as the chapters go on? This is straight booty juice
ch 12 Oops, My Hand Slipped
Urban · Unchanging Heart
reverse isekai? I see that I was a frog in a well comparing other novels to the might of senior brother author.
ch 0 3 Dinner Date
My Servant Is An Elf Knight From Another World
Fantasy · Brendanjoke