"HAHAHAHAHAHA!" Bruce grinned from ear to ear. "This is it! This is what I was waiting for!"
Urban · WritingMachineGun
"Ahh..." Ambrose laid down on the platform and stretched his limbs after hours of fighting. "I hate crows."
Fantasy · Alekzi
"You're a man, but there is no woman willing to shelter you from the wind and rain. Is that not more pathetic?"
Eastern · Heartless
Yoooo what about your equipment and weapons fool? What about the maps and catalogs all yall need to dungeon dive? How can you expect a ton if kids that have never been taught forging to make stuff? 🤔
"Everyone knows that among all the side jobs, only pharmacists are the most valuable and the most important."
Urban · Solo Leveling
You(author) did good work setting up his multi element talent with foreshadowing anyway. This is a magic world even if it is realistic so you don't have to exposition dump here. I appreciate the hard magic system you're going for but the character feels less intelligent by his rambling that walks us the audience through a process he should already understand
ch 59 Evolving Fusion Art
Games · LightningAsura
Years too late but you don't need a whole chapter dedicated to the dilemma of picking a route if the very next chapter we'll learn he can use both anyway. Also symbolically lightning and thunder are one. I understand you were going for a sound thing but lightning can't pass through air without making thunder anyway and it feels like a slap in the face to learn he'll get both after all that even though I knew it was coming anyway.
ch 59 Evolving Fusion Art
Games · LightningAsura
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Lin Mu
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
I love a good heist
ch 498 The Vault at Herb Peak
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
He wrapped around his face, trying to cover most of his face. He didn't want to get caught just yet, so he had to be low-key right now.
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
Games · Galanar