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waewie

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Dropped, below some remarks and reasons on this: The MC feels like he's all over the place. He's supposed to be the world's best assassin, no? And just ends up dying to someone that feels like a random NPC. Intro or not, it just felt lame. You would also think that the world's best assassin would know the value of information, and since the dude's supposed to be raised for this against his will, to be somewhat aversive to unknown people. Yet he blabbers right about everything to every new person he meets. Then he was told that you can die in the 1st trial and you just spawn to the beginning... And kills the 2 dudes to keep his secrets???? Like what?? Then leaves the girl alive because she promised to be his slave? Not to mention that nothing was mentioned how'd he enforce this, the moment MC reveled about "gaining himself a slave" felt yet again like a 12-year-old on a power trip. Also, as many have pointed out, the conversations in the free chapters feel really forced. As there's not much development in +20 chapters, I won't comment much on world background. However, in my opinion, mixing modern world technology to a fantasy world using mainly magic and cold weapons feels just weird (them using a limousine???) Author did mention the story only really starts and gets better after ch. 29, but since the free chapters gave no enticement, I fail to see why'd I use free passes or coins on this. Based on free chapters, this could be a ~3/5 considering it's the authors first work. Just not for me.

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