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Overall good just lack of background [img=gift][img=gift]

It's okay for now [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I Readed 133 chapters ands it's good the main mc is naruto and sub mc is sasuke Naruto gonna never use kurama power and he even gonna relase him OncJiraya heart broke he gonna start act like Koji/danzo everything is for konoha

Ngl this is best fan fic about naruto i Readed it's very unique very good and cool story [img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap]

Whic chapter he's go in earth

Frist 20 chapters was awesome but later the story development became mid like Chinese cliche fan fic and mc starting developing an fétish to catch girls for an future harem it's kinda sad because he interacted and demonstrated like 10+ chapters about how he love ino etc just to later make this fan fic an Harem

Belive in me this *Sasuke* fan fiction is the 1nd best in the world

At start i thought that this fan fic gonna focus in slice of life by seeing how seriously the mc takes his parent last words to not search for vengeance and not cares about Sasuke path insted focus on his life future for example use all the books he's Readed and use that knowledge + to become an higt grade in konoha like from junior consultant to Hokage consultant i don't think sarutobi would mind it as we saw in some chapters back he's maked mc junior consultant because he's dont have uchiha hatred and remind him how he becomed thrid hokage by insisting to stay with tobirama and buy time for his team and be chosen to become thrid hokage for his determination etc...

Story is cool but i suggest to add more scenes whic Kratos pass time with pepole because he's lack of interactions with pepole for exemple i only saw barely only 1 time whic he comes to Uchiwa Itachi house for Sasuke Brithday while he suposed to be friends :( other than that I'm also curious if mc bald? Or he will become bald later? Also I didn't understand the mc plot he's successor of Kratos name like obito for madara or it's an mix of souls of Kratos and an random guy?

This is an Peerless naruto fan fic even if he got only 10 chapters but it's an fan fic of quality whic seems be a an mix up of slice of life and action whic is extremely rare on naruto fan fic i have higt hope that this fan fic go beyond 4th shinobi war