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do you mean fire fist ace?
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One Piece: Finally Free
Anime & Comics · TheEnlightenedSage
this is the second time politics was spelled without an s
Understandably, this new Earth Government couldn't give no response at all either. They chose a rarely seen solution in politic: temporize. Two years after the 'False Third World War', as it was called now, the stabilized government made an announcement to pacify the mobs. It was rebroadcasted so many times that Jake could recite it by heart, in spite of his young age back then.
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
Washington D.C., not Washington
To sum it up in one sentence: Every major city was annihilated in a single day. Moscow, Tokyo, Paris, Washington, London; the names of every capital city one could think of had been erased from the face of the Earth. No explanation was given. No adventurous war reporter crossed the military cordon that cut off civilian access to these areas.
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
is*
Comment - A Pyramid of Crushed Flies.... Hand-crushed by none other than their master.... Quite the strange sight, even stranger it its geometrical symmetry.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
flies*
Within a small clearing of a lush jungle in which the size of the plant were ginormous stood 15. His recently washed jumpsuit a renewed orange color, still slightly damp from the spring-water it was washed in. Before him lie a mountain of fly's. A testimony to the work he had put in throughout the last hour.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
lied*
Within a small clearing of a lush jungle in which the size of the plant were ginormous stood 15. His recently washed jumpsuit a renewed orange color, still slightly damp from the spring-water it was washed in. Before him lie a mountain of fly's. A testimony to the work he had put in throughout the last hour.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
plants*
Within a small clearing of a lush jungle in which the size of the plant were ginormous stood 15. His recently washed jumpsuit a renewed orange color, still slightly damp from the spring-water it was washed in. Before him lie a mountain of fly's. A testimony to the work he had put in throughout the last hour.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
we're*
" Oh with these two things were gonna have alot of fun...."
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
bag*
15 pulled out a strange bag and the blood red medallion out of his pocket. He caressed the strange skull upon the coin before placing it aside and opening up the bag. Within the bad were two ingots and a strange blue sphere. The strange sphere was the size of a tennis ball and had the image of a fly within it.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
tear*
Within a dimly lit cave 15 laid on his back. His orange jumpsuit stained with a mixture of sweat, a strange blue colored blood, and brown bearlike fur. Surprisingly the jumpsuit itself was fine, without a single teat or rip anywhere.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
actively*
OH my lord they are to cute. 15 had to activly withhold the urge to rush up and start hugging every single one of the little bears he saw. All the little Kakazumi were dressed in strange tribal like clothing. It was impossible to tell males from females as they all seemingly dressed in the same multicolored garments. They were all as tall as an average mans waist and were all currently surrounding the strange temple.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
meant*
You know... Its probably not the smartest idea to start running to the smell of cooking meat in a place were I know absolutely nothing... But I mean .... food is ment to be shared right ??
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
scent*
His relaxation however was soon to be cut short. As a slight wind blew over the tantalizing sent of something roasting over a campfire...
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
they're*
" But I love people, their so entertaining"
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
excited*
And like a Karen who won something no matter how small 15 was exited. Even before knowing what he won he was quite pleased with himself.
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
also, make sure you punctuate dialogue
ch 0 1 Astral World
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
i pointed some out in the paragraph comments. make sure you know the difference between your and you're, and their, there and they're.
ch 0 1 Astral World
Exploiting an Online World
Games · Doctorkat
what kinda name is this? lol
Erik Fjord, Harald's father, growled at Ania as he stormed his way towards her. "Did you kill him? Then make up this nonsense about him trying to sell you off to hide your crime? Everyone here knows of my son's valour! Yet he was never enough for you, was he?"
Pantheon Online
Games · Antihero