so first off how to train your dragon is prob one of my favorite movie series so that's a plus one off rip. you portrayed Hiccup childhood to the T probably a little more darker but through the eyes of the victim aka Hiccup this was his childhood always wanted to be seen constantly pick on due to his size and feeling unwanted from his father due to his "mother's death" especially in their culture where men was warriors and seeing his son not matching the background especially as the chief of the villaige. this was portrayed very well and explain thoroughly and add Hela to mix what a chef's kiss, there's no noticeable Grammer issue you write the characters emotions very well over all I love the story I do hope you continue it.
plz continue this ill give all of my daily stones, this is so emotionally deep and it is....
this is really good, no complaints and I like mythical touch to the book with Hela and based off the little snips of dialogue from Hela this is the Marvel's Hela so I wonder how the story will evolve.
It sounded suspiciously like he was hiding a laugh.
Anime & Comics · Jane_Doe_Luvr
I just found your story, going to read it, but just based on the topic and realm mixing, I really hope you continue your story, maybe if you stay uploading, maybe tell us your upload schedule, since this is your original ff I know you will not be uploading daily unless you are about that grind.
you will continue the fic boring or not.... I like it.
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Anime & Comics · Opeler
it may be somewhat generic but overall good read, especially when you just want something simple.
her uterus is on steroid carrying all that courage.
Under everyone's gaze, Sona spoke slowly, "He is my boyfriend. The love of my life."
DxD: The Holy Knight!
Anime & Comics · verse7