Webnovel Author: sirmon - Novel Collection

interesting premise, the flow of the story is quite good too. i need more chapter to give my final review but for the time being it's good.

My dear 1st_KING when you steal an MTL and call it being bad at English. I will call bullshit. you are just using solen MTL form jpmtl.com, if you want to publish a book using MTL as a base at the fucking least try to correct some of the errors in the text, add some humane correction. P.S. the book by itself is Ok, I am just complaining about the laziness our 1st_KING is displaying and also his lack of integrity.

"The Eros God System – Saving the World and Defeating the Demonesses by Busting My Nut, One At a Time" was the name of the book before

sopapeador, am sorry but i don't see your point, i was not talking about the story, i was talking about the man who copied is own story/book(made a year ago). that is way i don't undurstand.

My friend, I am here to tell You a story the story of "The Eros God System – Saving the World and Defeating the Demonesses by Busting My Nut, One At a Time.". Once upon a time a good book with intresting caractere,good writing and a good story sadly it didn't last. the hordes of advertisement and fake chapter started, after that the legendary shorter chapter and story degradation began on the 34 chapters 22 had story the rest was advertisement and we as the readers had to withstand that, our tears of sorrow became blood and this blood filld our sallow grave. This was the story of a good book, killed by The Crow of Guilt. But My Friend it's not the end of the story because The Crow of Guilt returnd and upon realising his failure he decided to erase his book sadly now nobody can read The Original, Full of Fake chapters and Fake updates. "So what did the Crow do this time?" You say. Hahaha he made a new book, ho.... i mean a "new old" book, Maybe you did not see it because it's no longer available only people who were there at the time of the old war know about it. You see the "new old" is exactly the same book every letter is the same and The Crow only realised 9 chapters(and an extra with only that in it "阿斯顿啊u") and again our hearts were full of sorrow, but in the deepest part there was something else a powerful feeling that tear one's heart apart this feeling was hatred. we the people who supported The Crow and loved him started to feel loathing and hatred toward The bird who bring sorrow. And so this "new old" book only received one review by Gabriella and it was full of anger. now let's talk about what we have before our eyes the "new" book you who has not been part of the war maybe indifferent but you shall not be fool by The Crow of Guilt, He the one how bring sorrow will break your heart and mind i've warned you be careful. the "new" book is the same story but the MC Alex has a new name and he did not "slip down of an escalator" the rest of the story 95% is the same. A year we had a year of peace and the Crow dug out the war axe we who fought in the war are tired we no longer can fight we...we. we are weak. And here we are look a "new" chapter who look a lot like the "old" almost like the crow just change some word here and there to hide the truth. and after only 21 chapters you need to pay to read that mean the chapter 22" 34 Threesome (1)" is an "old" chapter so now you need to pay to read a chapter you've already read a year ago. I...i no longer have the force................... i think it is the end of the story..... excuse me i would like to be alone till my last moment. my friends i'm sorry if i am late,now is time i join you Goodbye World.