A beautiful chapter! I'm glad he let go of his father's coin. Powerful words..the man he remembered was precious but he may not like the one he might find. A new peaceful beginning with his only family Anita. And I'm glad Maria left...at least for now...LOL!
ch 51 Chapter Fifty One
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don't try to act too much Raphael..Riley knows already.
Raphael shook his head, "None indeed sure. I think they mistook me for someone else," he looked to Anita, "They were after Ann. Are we in some sort of danger?"
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haha!
"If that's the case, I'm surprised you bothered to come in person," Raphael whispered back, "I almost feel special."
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Looks like Maria is going to stay with them. I really don't like her :(
ch 50 Chapter Fifty
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Brilliant! I hope Riley and Sam can sit and talk and improve their relationship and he can be a father figure for Raphael and Anita too. I actually like Sam as a romantic partner for Raphael, she's more suited to him than Maria. Probably Anita can stay with Sam while Raphael serves his prison sentence, which should be reduced for helping catch Unknown Royals, saving the Queen and catching Benji gang. Please send Maria back to where she came from..I still don't like her..unless the Queen wants to keep her. And let's forget about Raphael's father too..who abandons their child just like that?
ch 49 Chapter Forty Nine
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Ah..too much drama.
ch 48 Chapter Forty-Eight
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I really really hope Anita is acting..she's smart enough to pull this off. But the green eyes?
Raphael bit down on his lip at the sight of Anita. Her eyes now bright green, aside from a passing comment of a headache and the occasional tilting of her head, she showed no signs of being in pain. "So why am I summoned then? I cannot be vengeful to mine enemies if mine enemies no longer exist!" Anita seemed outraged, "And in a vessel such as this? A mere child? And a girl no less! How, if I am to be any authority, shall I strike fear in a body such as this?" Anita seemed genuinely irritated.
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Is it an act our little smarty pants is putting on? I hope so...
ch 47 Chapter Forty Seven
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Riley is a good man and a caring father. I hope Phantom can help him reconcile with Sam after this adventure.
ch 43 Chapter Forty-Three
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Hadn't he torn the letter into pieces in anger?
"Don't try to trick me, Phantom. Hands, now." The Inspector readied his gun again, dropping the letter on the ground.
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I'm glad he sought out Inspector Riley.
By the time the Inspector charged outside, Raphael was sitting on top of the tall wall, two and a half meters from the red-faced Inspector. He smiled and tilted his hat, "Inspector, it's been a while. We've both looked better."
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Some back up would be nice.
ch 42 Chapter Forty Two
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wow! so he owes Benji for Anita.
Raphael had set her free long enough to run from the criminal's tavern, but in doing so, received a punishment of his own; several thousands of pounds of debt for stealing his property and several hundred more for losing at a game of distracting poker. 'She's quite an investment,' he had said, 'That makes her expensive unless, of course, you want to give her back.'
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A brilliant piece of work, unique story with suspense and adventure, beautifully written. The story keeps you hooked and the characters keep you captivated. This deserves a lot more appreciation. I'm glad I found this gem.
Phantom Of Paris
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