Of course Demon, originality score -20
ch 0 2 Online
Games · Sabet_Saga
Also, advanced sword requires D stre.ngth
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Character strength is E+, not the D- required to open the bus door . Easy fix.
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The group safely transported those three scientists across a zombie/mutant no-mans land. The officer should have realized this, unless they are beyond stupid.
ch 292 Why Don’t You Change the World?
Sci-fi · Dark Litchi
Need to be able to edit these, sharing information that could help everyone costs the MC nothing.
ch 17 Cloud Of Confusion About The Ruins, The Hoarding Continues!
Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty
So cry about Humanity, but not mention the undead found in ruins? I would not expect the MC to do things like giving his water away, value for value. 2 or 3 liters of water spread among 600+ people is nothing after all. However dont information that could help everyone
ch 17 Cloud Of Confusion About The Ruins, The Hoarding Continues!
Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty
Still not increasing mentality or willpower . Dont be a dumb MC.
ch 145 Paralyzing Spear
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Not sure what to think of him at the end, expecting a reward was understandable, but perhaps pushing his luck with a powerful being? As he has discovered death and pain are possible so Keep the greedy hamster under control.
ch 26 Chapter 26. Goddess’ gifts
Games · UnrivaledArcaner
It appears he picked up the dress twice.
ch 18 Chapter 18. Equipment Upgrade
Games · UnrivaledArcaner
Hes an idiot, waiting till hes In a fight to choose his ability? Not into stupid characters. If You wanted the MC to be forced to choose have him placed into danger due to external factors where his life is on the line. Putting himself in mortal danger and randomly picking hit ability = idiot.
ch 15 Bear Beast Hunter
Fantasy · Chad_Farmer
Good read, Already used my power stones or you would have gotten them. Always tomorrow .
ch 41 C41. Awakened
Fantasy · AnimeTagz
Why not make him fat? Not everyone is the same.
I am enjoying this story, but you like to throw big numbers around a little to much. The military can’t land 360,000 troops anywhere that easily. Desert storm involved 900,000 but that was At the end of the Cold War and took months to put into place. The most the US could deploy on short notice would be about 20,000 marines, and by short notice im talking about a week to ten days.
ch 670 The Killing Blow
Urban · Goose Five
He made space marines from warhammer 40k. I like it.
ch 235 T-Black Knight
Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear
Hes not spending his stat points .
ch 0 7 Hitting the levels hard and my first dungeon
Games · easyread
Thanks for the chapter, enjoying your story.
ch 53 Battle Suit
Fantasy · JustAWanderer
The president was doing his job. Just like the leader of any country has to put the welfare of his people first. Then help others if they can. If one of those had been headed to russia you can guess what the russians in space would have done. Nothing shameless about it.
ch 18 Shameless United States
Sci-fi · Seventeenth Zither
Skipped over to the table? A little childish, he’s a reincarnator not going to kindergarten, just say walked over to the table.
ch 0 4 Changes in Life
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Games · jdbeue