Dakie_Salamander

I tried, I really tried, but it is just garbage. It is awful read. Author says he is English... I have hard time believing that. The grammar, syntax, constant use of certain words or phrases, hand-holding ("due to", "because", "as something something")... all atrocious. Editing is non-existent. Even basic proof-reading. It is just lazy job. If he is truly an natively-speaking English, he should return back to 5th grade. Because that is where his level is. Characters are just plain. They are interchangeable without any interesting traits or hooks. Story is just typical reincarnation idiocy you can find in every fic of the same format on WN. World background: Author clearly doesn't understand Fallout-verse. Or of he does, he doesn't show it. One glaring plot-hole after another, nonsensical actions... Do not waste time. It is not even enjoyable brain-rot.

Delete chapter one and two, and it could be readable brainrot. I just couldn't go past that garbage. It is one of the worst setups I have ever read.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read, hands-down. I just binge-read it in the through Friday to Sunday morning. I barely slept. Like 5-6 hours in the last two days. And I haven't done anything else. It is amazing. It is not over-the-top. It just hangs there, precisely on the top. Writing Quality is incredible, especially for Webnovel. Story? Great! MC, Daniel Miller, takes on the incredibly corrupt and stale entertainment titans and WINS. And continue winning. It feels amazing, especially now, when we all know the garbage the Hollywood released in the last 10 years or so. Characters are well fleshed, they are interesting and relatable. Just people. Which is incredibly hard to write.

Two stars only because of passable grammar.

Clearly AI slop. The person either doesn't know English or just doesn't care. Dialogues are awful, character barely two-dimensional, MC is boring and without ambition or really anything except being a vehicle. Eris is just annoying. The rest of the characters are just barely there. Storyline and world-building is barely cognizant to the original. If you never watched/read Mushoku Tensei, you would never even know what to imagine. Author doesn't even understand the original story, world-building, systems or what it is all about. Take this story as an AI slop AU with an author too lazy to think for himself.

It is surprisingly good. Really. Surprised even me. Was massively skeptical. It is fun and I enjoy it... The characters from the shows are well captured. MC is NOT obnoxious.

Unreadable, unfun garbage with translation making it even worse than the original. It is awful and complete waste of time. Webnovel garbage. Better to read so XianXia. At least it makes sense there.

Writing is mediocre in all. Not much mistakes or errors. You won't find any complicated sentences, nor words. Everything is written in simple English. There is no undertones, no interesting twists nor word-plays. Stability of updates is fairly good. Not much to say there. Now, the story; After c205... And it turned into complete dogshit. It was bad story even before that, a wish-fulfill hot trash, but it was... readable for what it is. But after the invasion? One of the worst turns ever made. I won't spoiler, but it's boring, stupid and frankly idiotic only showing that author is not a good or talented. He wrote himself in the corner. Character design, except for the MC, everyone is just twisted lessened versions of the originals. As expected from fanfic. World background is the same. Lessened version of the original.