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good start... at least they are talking sense... let Ori cry and release her pent up emotions...Arlan at his best here...

don't go...

we are also waiting for whatever is going to come our way ....hope it is happiness and companionship...but ...will not be surprised if our lovely author makes it difficult for our prince...

poor thing 😞

I have a feeling that I am literally watching an action movie here...

there is a little smile on my face after reading this cute chapter . ...dray is an absolute gentleman and a lovely husband ...

chapter seems jumbled ...

i feel soooo sad for Casiano ....

I don't know why but I feel very sad for Casiano suddenly ...though he was wrong in the past but....Hope he and Alla won't miss each other forever ...

interesting twists and turns

Sweet and Calm chapter ...

this Casiano is so unfortunate ...he himself seems to be trapped in his own web of lies ...

I have a feeling that Ricky is also alive...

Oriana is acting just like her teacher .... arrogant and insulting ..

very well written chapter ..the pain,the desperation, the helplessness, all emotions are well handled and described ...we can feel the characters ...thanks author for this lovely gem....

Dr. Wastons gender is so unclear here... someplace it's a HE and other It's a SHE... grammar error....that's kind of unsettling here...otherwise the story is pretty interesting so far...

Deities, Spirits, whoever can listen to me... please tell the author we want more....

same thought...

Let the fight begin! ....go queen Oriana....we are vouching for you ...save your prince...