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I like the story so far, but you only need to use boost once or boostx10 or something…it doesn’t sound great on audio…
[Boost, Boost, Boost, Boost, Boost, Boost, Boost, Boost, Boost.]
The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
Great chapter! Not killing Mundi was the right decision, even if Plo needed to point it out. I like how he is still struggling for balance as it is so rare in the lore. It would be impossible to achieve in 2 years. If he was truly balanced, he would realize that keeping Mundi alive would get him and the Jedaii more in the end.
ch 115 Chapter 112: Fifth Great Schism Episode IV
Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Not a hard one to guess… though not sure how guys wearing bulky power armor could reach behind their back much at all…
"By your command, Lord Ferrus," Amadeus placed a clench fist over his heart with his other hand placed behind his back. This was a salute that they saw the Grey Knights and Knights of Feluc perform and had begun mimicking, though no one knew where it came from. (Name it and you get a bonus chapter tomorrow)
Warhammer Lost Primarch: The 2nd Knight
Anime & Comics · ForestOfDarkness
In any other universe, this amount of resources and cheat codes would be a massive overkill. It’s amusing how even with all the OP rewards and accumulated strength talked about, I’m like…yeah that’s barely enough to turn the tides.
ch 149 Returning to 40k and Rewards...
Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System
War · Lee_Kah
+1
3. A self-insert into Galen Mark. Also known as Starkiller
Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
The heart is weird for 40K…even if you go female route
ch 148 Side chapter: What happens to the traitors, Horus....
Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System
War · Lee_Kah
Overall, a perfect Segway while honoring the magnitude of the Battle of Terra without getting bogged down in the mess of the books.
ch 147 Horus Heresy III
Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System
War · Lee_Kah
Awesome summation chapter! I think you handled this perfectly balancing League’s efforts while keeping the fateful ends. It makes the next 40K arc very fresh while easier to tweak into what you’ve been prepping for. Looking forward to it as you are easily my favorite 40K FF out there. I’m not a lore expert, but I think Sanguinius’s stasis is new and an interesting twist. Even if it is canon, the reference gives me hope that Alex will do his system magic and bring him back to the party.
ch 147 Horus Heresy III
Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System
War · Lee_Kah
Thanks for the chapter, but a serious cliff left…
ch 161 -158- Linwin of Zaun
Arcane: Champion Witness System
Video Games · TypicalFicEnjoyer6
+1. I would try to establishing them as a faction within the Republic meant to defend outer rim from the rising chaos first before any leaving of the republic. Then leave during the clone wars while allying against the cis. That last part needs work on the details, tho
1. Galactic Systems Alliance
Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
Side note, I’ve been playing rogue trader and having a MHA cRPG would be cool!
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💯 looking forward to how you work the chess pieces into hero fights. I know he’ll hide a certain amount of his power for story reasons and hidden cards in the future, but even a downgraded version would be super fun!
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She’s my favorite side character! Always the best troll!
"MACKENZIE WE TALKED ABOUT THIS!"
The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
So many are dropped that I lost count…please don’t drop 🥲
Any suggestions on where to find more RWBY fanfics as I generally want to read more as I really do love the universe/show.
Another Chance in the World of Remnant
Anime & Comics · ShadowlessBlade
If you decide to use multiple RWBY teams,I would select your favorite one or two RWBY teams and roll with them. There were too many, and it seemed like you were using them to stall for time. I say that, but I have trouble narrowing it down. Using the kid and negative teams as comic relief the same way would be a still great add IMO. Negative team trying and failing to steal stuff would be a funny scene, maybe having the kid team puppy-eyes them into rethinking life. Then return them to their worlds. Original team would be kinda amusing to see his world, then want their world back. I think saving grimm team and revealing his altruistic side so the other teams trust him past his villain identity in DC. I’m very “meh” on the hero team. You may hate this, but having the other RWBY teams convince him to mend his relationship with the Justice League would be so on brand, especially for Ruby.
Multiple versions of Team RWBY, yes or no, and what versions would you like to see if yes?
Another Chance in the World of Remnant
Anime & Comics · ShadowlessBlade
This would be a refreshing new fan fiction
2) Martial Universe (Wu Dong Qian Kun)
BTTH Life Simulator System
Anime & Comics · Kisshot
Which is a pinky and the brain reference…
"Was that a phineas and ferb reference?" Gwen asked while tilting her head.
Spider-Man Mayhem
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3