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: This is the author of Marvel’s Maelstrom, the original poster of this story on FanFiction.Net. I’m not familiar with the site, so getting ahold of whoever posted this is beyond me at the moment. So, I figured I’d leave a review for them or anyone else interested, and hope it gets to where it needs to go.

I did not approve my story getting posted on this site. He did not contact me, in fact the only reason I’m aware is because of a PM sent to me by a concerned reader. If I had agreed, I’d have requested that the title be the same as my own to avoid any confusion, and that a part of the description asks the readers to at least visit my story on FanFiction.Net. The reason for this is because if you want to leave a review or even private message me, the best way for me to see it is by doing it on the FanFiction.Net page. That way I see it immediately and I can respond to you if you’re messaging me. That, and I’d like as many people visiting the actual story as I can. I’m selfish like that lol.

The only reason I’m not upset over this is because the author had the courtesy to give me credit in the description. I’m not going to ask that this be taken down, or stopped. All I ask is for the poster of this to do as I requested above. I’m glad that this is spreading and people seem to be reacting amazingly to it, but I’d have preferred if you simply asked ahead of time. If the poster or anyone reading this would like to get ahold of me, private messaging me on FanFiction.Net is your best bet. I’m also on Reddit, under the same name, if for whatever reason the fanfic site isn’t an option. Thanks to anyone who’s enjoyed my story so far, and I hope to see your reviews soon!

Naruto In Marvel Universe
2 weeks ago
Exp-Sect · C10
2 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
The Hitting Zone · C1
3 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Be happy with sports · C1
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C85
Really good story! The only issue i have is grammar.
Characters and emotions are on point and the pace of the story is excellent overall a good story with a lot of promises. View More
Be happy with sports
3 weeks ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Be happy with sports · C1
3 weeks ago
Common author mistakes- daily push ups until the body hit the limit or breaks them wont make the person stronger. Kids shouldn't do them until the right age , by doing so will stunt the growth. Food and energy intake is more important in that age than exercise. Although exercising the right amount will help , over doing can seriously damage the body. Especially for a kid. View More
No longer a novel. · C0
4 weeks ago

Zenkaiboost: Really, a gem within trashes. I really gave up reading fanfictions on this site because people here only care about how cool the cheats and how many women mc can fk. (And also the ppl who complain about how the fanfic is not going the same way as cannon but who cares about them)
As for the review, the start itself is unique one with no wishes, no systems and no absurd power up. Update is not as frequent as others . The story follows a story line different from others. Grammatically , i won't complain about this as I am not very proficient in that area as you can probably see in my review. Really, the story deserves more.

One piece Fan Fiction: Renji
1 month ago

Venerable_Eiyuu: We a have our starts and i hate to admit it but my beginning isn't good. The one thing that i need the most right now is experience so by writing chapters as time passea by i hope that i can improve and provide you guys a more detailed and well structured content.

HOTD Mature Parody
1 month ago
Reading Status: C17
Really, a gem within trashes. I really gave up reading fanfictions on this site because people here only care about how cool the cheats and how many women mc can fk. (And also the ppl who complain about how the fanfic is not going the same way as cannon but who cares about them)
As for the review, the start itself is unique one with no wishes, no systems and no absurd power up. Update is not as frequent as others . The story follows a story line different from others. Grammatically , i won't complain about this as I am not very proficient in that area as you can probably see in my review. Really, the story deserves more. View More
One piece Fan Fiction: Renji
1 month ago

Legion20: Ok, here is my review.
Writing quality: 1 star. Honestly, your english is quite bad, and that cripples the novel in all its aspects. Here some examples from chap 1: you can't use .", After every spoken/thought phrase. The period is there for a reason, it already implies a pause, the comma is redundant. In all the chapters you mix up the Verb tenses, by alternating the use of the present ("one can find a young lad") and the past tense"Said lad was a 6'2". In chap 1, but it also happens often in other chapters,
you use nonsensical phrases "The driver freaked out when his brakes didn't respond, so much so that he even forgot to turn his steering wheel to avoid hitting anyone.
Unfortunately, that's exactly what happened to our assumed protagonist." Afaik this one means that the MC too forgets to turn the steering wheel, and clearly that is not the case. Should have written "Unfortunately, that's exactly what he did to our assumed protagonist."
Another example from chap2:"He was standing in the middle of a luscious green forest where insects and birds chirping softly filled the entire place." As it's phrased both birds and insects are chirping softly, plus it comes to the reader's mind that every inch of the place is covered in insects and birds. From chap 21 "As the sun had already set, and the interesting crew of misfit were tucking themselves in for bed" the and is redundant; crew of misfits, plural, a crew can't be composed by a single person. The verb should be was, not were, since the subject is the crew (singular). "Tucking themselves in for bed" makes no sense. It can be either "tucking themselves in their beds" or "tucking themselves in, preparing to sleep". As it is, it seems that by tucking in they get a bed, idk how it would be possible. Also plz try to avoid messing up plural and singular, you do it often.
Avoid using too much or too litlle punctuation, try reading out loud what you write to see if is easy to read. If you get out of breath or lose your train of thought something is wrong.
Stability of updates: 5 stars, so far you are doing great.
Story development 2 stars: Everything feels kinda rushed, expecially in the first 3 chapters. There are so many things wrong with the scene of void Vs gods that would require a review by itself. The MC gets the system because somehow he helped the void, but you never explain why the void actually needs him.
Char design, world building: 3 stars, i am not a fan of OP, so I may be biased, but your MC aside, most of the chars and world is the same from the author, so meh! (imo) The MC could be interesting, but he starts with too much powers+knowledge to let the reader experience any suspanse. Even if MC fails changing hystory, worst case scenario is like what happened in OP, and even he knows that all the crew has plot armour (at least until the point he read the published manga).
I suggest you doing some proofreading or finding yourself an editor. I know that you write stuff on the fly and proofreading is boring AF, but it's very important if you want to step up the quality of your work.

[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime
5 months ago

cultivating_neet: If you are an actual one piece fan and know anything about it do not waste your time reading this story. I can confidently declare that reading will make your brain turn into mush and fall out your ears, it's really that bad.

[ON HIATUS] One Piece: Journey of a Lifetime
5 months ago

CH405Kaiser: Updates are okay.

If you like stories that make no sense, for example,

Son of Superman and Wonder Woman + raised by Batman = tell unknown people that you just met your secret identity and background

If one is raised by Batman, what the flying hell happen to all that stealth and cunning training by Bruce Wayne (Batman).

Also, Deadpool, who is stranded in a void with the MC who has found himself thrust into the void, decides to break the 4th wall by suddenly dubbing his universe as the Marvel Universe. He even goes as far as gaining knowledge of said universe without any explanation as well as listing other movies related to the MCU.

Story develops after the mention of ‘Doom of Heroes’ which is a fanfic event made by the author. There is little to no evidence how the event even happened or who was the start of it, other than the fact that a reporter says negative things on tv as well as a brief mention of Bruce Wayne.

Character Design is quite bland as there is nothing that separates the characters other than the author’s words of how one looks through awkward word usage. The author should have the characters be able to express their feelings through facial expressions, gestures, or actions.

World background could have been smoother if not for the fact that half the stuff Ethan Wayne supposedly raised by Batman is quite the contradiction when he gives details to his life through unknown people. The fact he doesn’t disappear after first contact is even more disturbing.

Overall, I don’t plan on reading this novel as there are too many plot holes that does not give a cohesive story.

A Hero's Multiverse
5 months ago

lIl: You already know what type of story this is. The protagonist gets 5 wishes and to go to ANY world of his choosing, and of course, he didn't wish to be god. No, he chose to be born in the DxD universe. He could've chosen pokemon, a world were no one dies, but no.

He then wishes for "A primordial bloodline that can let me tap into the power of the ancients". What is that supposed to even mean? Do 'the ancients' mean your ancestors before humanity? If so, did you just wish for the power of a great ape? Honestly...

He then wishes to be born as Issei's brother, for no reason whatsoever other than to make it interesting. Did you just wish for your life to be filled with danger? Do you have a mental disability?

Entering the World of HSDxD
6 months ago
This Broly is already stronger than super saiyan 3 goku (he just kicked the ass of 4 super saiyan 2)even before the android saga starts. If you compare to this Broly with the one from first movie, he is a lot stronger. Of course he is not blue or even red level. Beating Beerus in two chapter is fun , i don't really know i guess. What is he going to do after that? Kill Zeno? With what power up? Super saiyan rainbow? View More

okyo: Oh please. If you really are a db fan then you should know that you have to get strong in a few days not an entire year just to defeat that guy, there is no actual plot in real life that's why goku had such massive power-ups in a few days. It's either kill or be killed.

Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
7 months ago

Insert_Nickname: I'm aware that the actual author may not view this, but the problem I had with this, is not only how weak Ichigo was made, but how his character was Fairy Tail'd within seconds of joining. Firstly, this Ichigo was taken from after the fullbring arc, yet they make him seem only slightly stronger than characters from the start of fairy tail; the dude's a casual mountain buster in shikai, but has to resort to his hollow form to fight Gajeel? At the start of the series no less! Furthermore he had little to no emotional insentive to be hollowfied: Makarov was injured. That's it. Suddenly, after only three or four encounters with the man, seeing him hurt was enough to trigger his hollow form? When he's seen worse things happen to people he cares about, and has known for years, but still managed to retain control?? He isn't a fairy tail veteran, he would at best be angry and end the confrontation swiftly, but be hollowfied? Pfft.

7 months ago

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Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
7 months ago

Joao_Arthur: Damn, the Author really knows how to describe everything, i can imagine the whole scenario, the Protagonist growing, explanations about energies like LifeForce and stuff, the character improving and analysing, not the typical dumb protagonist....

Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
7 months ago

HatoYain: I like how authors just slap energies around and not realising how flipping similar they are or how haki isn't even a flipping energy....

Rebirth in Mushoku Tensei
7 months ago

tekite: What a retard. The whole of db universe.is about becoming strong in a few days or months lol. What are you even smoking? The db universe isnt sth fucking complicated or anything, you get strong if you have good bloodline and is angry enough. What did you expect? Some profound ****? You must have been eating edibles when watching dbz?

Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
7 months ago
If I have to become a retard to read the good fanfic with actual plot, so be it. "I am a retard". Overpowering main characters make it difficult for authors to write the interesting plot bro. Readers will complain if their favourite characters get stomped or saying the fights are boring in the comment section are not uncommon. I am just recommending this fanfic as a good read. I don't know the author but I respect him. He is writing this for free and I am just reading this to pass time. Don't be rude to the people because he or she does not agree with you. The world doesn't work that way bro. View More

tekite: What a retard. The whole of db universe.is about becoming strong in a few days or months lol. What are you even smoking? The db universe isnt sth fucking complicated or anything, you get strong if you have good bloodline and is angry enough. What did you expect? Some profound ****? You must have been eating edibles when watching dbz?

Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
7 months ago

Niyeban: To potential readers,

Sometimes, I grapple with what the word "author" means. It's just someone that has published some type of written work, in a way. The word doesn't grasp all the "authors" that I follow the works of are.

The word "writer" doesn't do Renoe_K justice, either. "Writers" are just people that form texts from stringing ideas together. It's a better word. It shows how language can be manipulated and molded to communicate concepts. It adds an element of artistry.

Still, anyone can be a writer. Many can make it to authorship - that's just a writer of tenacity, resilience, and determination. He is more.

The closest I can get is "storyteller." He conveys more than what can be put on paper. He shares journeys. He creates worlds. He makes something from nothing. He expresses in his works emotion, feeling, meaning, something *deeper.* He forms connections that go so much beyond those of ideas; he connects minds, hearts, souls, and spirits. He tells stories.

Don't fall victim to his humility.

Parallel Online (A Virtual Gamer's Story)
7 months ago

boob: For the fan of dbz especially broly's fan
in this story you can see a real legendary super saiyan
fight and training again and again the author seem to realy respect the saiyans race "warriors race" no harem **** juste a pure tribute too the legendary super saiyans broly. A big thank you to the author for this gift

Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
7 months ago
I beg for the extra chapters as a new year gift for lonely me who has nothing to do other than read your novel at 12.00( in my time zone). View More
Broly The Saiyan of Legend! · C90
7 months ago

Zenkaiboost: This is not a fanfiction! This is the Douluo Dalu 3.1. If the author is named Tang Jia San Shao I would believe it. At first I just thought this as an another DD fanfic with some cheats. But after just reading first few chapters, I just can't get enough of it.
If you are looking for a self insert fan fic , go read others. This is about a oc main character with actual developments.
If you are looking for a harem , just turn away.
No ridiculous system , No ridiculous power up, No ridiculous god's gift. What this one has is an acual plot, character developments for both main and side characters. This Is Not " all men are bad guys and girls just fall in love with mc" type novel. What can you ask for more?

Big respect for the author.

Douluo Dalu - The Story of Sheng Feilong
7 months ago
Reading Status: C50
This is not a fanfiction! This is the Douluo Dalu 3.1. If the author is named Tang Jia San Shao I would believe it. At first I just thought this as an another DD fanfic with some cheats. But after just reading first few chapters, I just can't get enough of it.
If you are looking for a self insert fan fic , go read others. This is about a oc main character with actual developments.
If you are looking for a harem , just turn away.
No ridiculous system , No ridiculous power up, No ridiculous god's gift. What this one has is an acual plot, character developments for both main and side characters. This Is Not " all men are bad guys and girls just fall in love with mc" type novel. What can you ask for more?

Big respect for the author. View More
Douluo Dalu - The Story of Sheng Feilong
7 months ago
Please don't make goku handle everything like canon. View More
Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human · C78
7 months ago
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Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human · C78
7 months ago
How is he going to act in front of goku? He can understand his opponent's heart right? View More
Broly The Saiyan of Legend! · C80
7 months ago
First! Need more chapters. Do you have a patreon? Cause I totally need it. View More
Broly The Saiyan of Legend! · C77
8 months ago
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