Webnovel Author: SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

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This chapter give me the multiverse senses I don't know if it will go full isekai or not but the feeling is good on this one

ch 58 The Greatest Explorer of All Time

A Godslayer in a School

Anime & Comics · Dragon15681

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to joyboy69

i did change the marking after the early chapter will need to wait before I changedthem too it's a work on hold for later date

YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST

Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to VividSilverWolf

all my story are work in progress i will not stop so don't worry

THE GREAT FANTASY ANIME SYSTEM (ENG EDITED)

Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to Zeus_Lawliet

not exactly. what GOLDEN RULE do is perfect what you have. in the case of Gilgamesh he was a collector so the perfect form of collector is collecting heaven defying tresors. This is just an example of how broken Golden Rule is as a skill

[Golden rule]

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Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to HDvt

actually simple the perfection of luck became luck EX .one point also,hving LUCK EX is not alwas good

Bell worked hard to restore his breathing so that his body could in battel ready stat as soon as possible. The hand that slowly held the Goblin Dagger no longer continued to tremble with excitement. Breathing no longer continues to be rapid. The first thing you need to pay attention to survive in the wild is your physical strength. The same is true in the dungeon, where stamina and energy are the first things to keep an eye for. If you can't measure the upper limit of your physical strength, then you can easily fall into an ambush of monsters and die easily. Soon four to five goblins were hiding in the nearby darkness, a dark corner that could hardly be seen by the human eye. Fortunately for Bell he was accustomed to the darkness, and his eyes could already see his target in the darkness. This also allowed Bell to officially see what a goblin looked like. The body is dark green, a slender body and a little sharp ear, but the expression on the face is unusually vicious. They hands hold a slightly curved short knife. A frightening cold light can be seen at the edge of the blade, telling its danger to all how see it.

YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST

Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to Zeus_Lawliet

in the Type Moon wiki Golden Rule mean perfection in body and wealth but not luck

[Maybe it's only luck.]

YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST

Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to Nepu_Nep

Actually by remake i mean changing possibly everything while keeping the core values of the story for example i did keep bell in Hestia familia but bell itself changed (more Magus like than the airhead Hero in the original work and more darker than the original fanfiction ) i did similar things to skill a code of conduct just as exemple i plan to change more things as the story progress hopefully for the better to the audience.

YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST

Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to Daoist9177NN

i switched the name of some skills to be more in line with Fate TYPE MOON

[Imperial Privilege].

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Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to HDvt

golden rule in type moon refer to fortune not just gold but also perfection and luck

Bell worked hard to restore his breathing so that his body could in battel ready stat as soon as possible. The hand that slowly held the Goblin Dagger no longer continued to tremble with excitement. Breathing no longer continues to be rapid. The first thing you need to pay attention to survive in the wild is your physical strength. The same is true in the dungeon, where stamina and energy are the first things to keep an eye for. If you can't measure the upper limit of your physical strength, then you can easily fall into an ambush of monsters and die easily. Soon four to five goblins were hiding in the nearby darkness, a dark corner that could hardly be seen by the human eye. Fortunately for Bell he was accustomed to the darkness, and his eyes could already see his target in the darkness. This also allowed Bell to officially see what a goblin looked like. The body is dark green, a slender body and a little sharp ear, but the expression on the face is unusually vicious. They hands hold a slightly curved short knife. A frightening cold light can be seen at the edge of the blade, telling its danger to all how see it.

YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST

Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to aiden_rivera

it would be difficult cause you have to understand that the only way to get to Loki familia is by having a rare if not unique skill or ability also it's one of the 2 king on orario so it end with only small choices Hestia on first place on any low familia i don't think I need to explain why Freya is not an option

[Good! I guess i have to for the "Hestia clan".]

YOU GOT THE WRONG PERSON FOR A PROTAGONIST

Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Commented

To Rise the anticipation of the readers here's a little tip the skill i plan to use are the most Nerfed skill in the Type Moon universe but i will use then in they full power only a hardcore fan of the Narsuverse will be able to understand what I did and probably Most of them will call my Version of BELL broken or OP so stay tuned.

ch 10 CHAPTER 09

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Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to ThreshGasm

as i said some details are changed add or removed so not to confuse the two

ch 0 1 IMPORTANT

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Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Commented

thank you all it do help to know my mistake to correct them and i do plan do just that.there will be improvement in the upcoming releases as i get more in home with the story

ch 0 2 CHAPTER 01

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Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to neis_marko

unless necessary i don't like to use lemon so don't worry it will be labeled if it happen

ch 0 2 CHAPTER 01

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Anime & Comics · SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Replied to Abyssal_Ram123

i think this story is more in line with what is more realistic in the middle age time of spoiled princess and young master character template i think the real novel didn't want to give this dark them so it was watered down a lot compared with the real thing.

DxD: ReKiba

Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Commented

Short chapter aside i don't see any error in the script and story development even if i think it's a little rushed.

ch 35 Valerie

DxD: ReKiba

Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda

SCARLETToFBoCOTHER

1yr

Posted

hi i will first say good job for the story. Now for the review here are the point i did find : - you story is the closest one to the real development of the series in term of Riser act before the start of the actual novel (it was noted on the novel that Riser is caracter and the reason of marriage was forced by the rias father ). -the fact that you implemented the sword used in different anime give a much refreshing change than what the real author of high school DXD didn't want to challenge (causes most of the gear are imagination driven Wich mean unlimited possiblity ). -The choice of the MC was on point (i mean Let's be honest it was a forgotten character until the Excalibur Arc). now for what i find negative : - Some writing error (not much of a problem most reader skip them without thinking . -Most chapter are Short ranging from the 900 to 2000 word - Possibly all chapter End by a cliff hanger Wich can be bad some time (depend on the reader most of the time . - the possibility of story development change (the remove of Kiba from the picture early). - The need to change from original time line(while not much the role played by Kiba in the 2 to 3 Arc was important). at the End it's a good story still I'm very interested to know you will develope the story further cause you took out an important piece from the beginning