Falen420

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Losing interest in this story after the last chapter.

ch 31 Moving Forward Part 8 (Edited)

Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man

Anime & Comics · Othniel_Seth

Falen420

16h

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Yeah, this whole thing with Inko feels forced and wrong. I'm going to try to read a few more chapters, but if this story continues to be gross, then all I can say is, Bye.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

Falen420

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This is a chore to read. Every single verb and noun used in every sentence has its very own adjective or adverb. Honestly, Shakespeare is easier to read than this.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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It just doesn't stop....

Hours melted unnoticed as they delved deeper into their shared history, exploring the nuances of their individuality and the threads that bound them together. Their conversation became a dance of understanding and acceptance as they bared their hearts, revealing vulnerabilities and celebrating strengths. In this sacred space of connection, the walls that once separated them crumbled, replaced by a bridge of empathy and unconditional love.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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Soo much useless fluff added to stretch the story out, but looking back, nothing really happened in the story, i mean you can summarize what happened so far into like 2 paragraphs, the rest is all just useless fluff with long adverbs and adjectives to make the fluff even more fluffy.

ch 17 Chapter 1.16

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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This is so stupid.

His eyes scanned the shops and stalls lining the street, searching for any sign of the elusive herb. The full moon was drawing near, and his body needed to be prepared for the transformation that would inevitably follow. Aconite, also known as wolfsbane, was his only hope.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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God, I'm getting tired of hearing about how he feels about himself at least twice in every paragraph.

Orion realized that the effort he had put into fortifying his home protected and empowered him. He knew he could create a safe and nurturing space for himself and his loved ones, and he felt a newfound sense of strength and confidence in himself and his abilities.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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why all this useless fluff?

Additionally, he created a talisman to promote positive energy and harmony in his home. It was designed to promote peaceful and harmonious energy within his house, creating a safe and nurturing space for himself and his loved ones. The talismans were made from rose quartz and amethyst, representing love, joy, and harmony.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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Or just Convenient plot.

As Orion focused on his inner thoughts, he realized he needed to siphon the spell hiding his crescent mark all these years. How had he not sensed the magic on his body before? It was a mystery.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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So, he advertises rings for wolves and vampires, then years later, when a wolf contacts him, then he goes looking for the moonlight ring spell. A spell that Esther created later in the series and was specifically linked to Klaus for them to work. Stupid

After that, I was on a mission to unlock the secrets of Ayana Bennett's spell book. I was determined to find the elusive moonlight ring spell that Esther had used significantly in the past. After hours of pouring over the ancient text, I finally found the spell. It was similar to the daylight ring spell but with a few key differences.

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Falen420

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Nty, Bye

ch 0 -1 Harem of the Mc

Improvise, Adapt, Evolve (Multiverse) (Now on DxD)

Anime & Comics · Adrianix1234

Falen420

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Go Go Cringe Power

Humanity is always expanding, this food shortage will not be temporary as long as the population keeps growing. So, in order for humanity to live in safety we must find where the titan's originated and kill them all!" by the end of my little speech I was breathing a little heavy.

The Slayer Gamer

Video Games · TheOneThatRead

Falen420

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If the {?} are for random races, why are there 3 of them? {Human}{Random} or {Human}{?} makes much more sense.

[The question marks represent a random race from across the entire multiverse. You could end up a Saiyan, a frog, or a flying spaghetti monster. So . . . . feeling lucky?]

The Slayer Gamer

Video Games · TheOneThatRead

Falen420

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I smell Edge...

Tavish Byrne

The Slayer Gamer

Video Games · TheOneThatRead

Falen420

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Not even gonna try to read this..... This chapter has like 200 words. GTFO

ch 0 2 Birth

Reincarnated as Superman in Marvel/DC [ Dropped]

Fantasy · Insert_Here

Falen420

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Hard to read. It starts out promising, like the first two or three chapters are okay'ish, but it very quickly turns into a unsatisfying mix of stupidity and cringe.