Polyp

Polyp

1yr

Commented

So there’ no finger print technology In this world?

ch 13 A Cute Murderer (2)

Deranged Writer's Afterword

Fantasy · Carrot_Dude

Polyp

1yr

Commented

Seriously? Chocolate? Big brain idea for someone that doesn’ want his identity to be associated with earth

"Welcome back," he said, approaching them. "I see you brought along a new guest today. I hope you enjoy yourself." Lex smiled, and handed the young boy a piece of chocolate. The chocolate was wrapped in a golden and silver wrapper with the initials MI on it. It was a little something he added to the Inn earlier, so that he could have the system leave chocolate on the guests pillow after the turndown service. The chocolate would automatically taste like whatever chocolate the guest preferred. There was no other benefit to it, but Lex liked the idea.

The Innkeeper

Fantasy · lifesketcher

Polyp

2yr

Replied to Granville4554

I think the author mean coming from same ancestry and from the same family.

"Sure," Mei Xue answered. She dusted off the debris accumulated on this ancient book. "[...] as the passage goes, the witch and the wizard both originate from the same family. Not only that, presumably, they are from the same family. If word of this gets out to the village, those zealots will not be happy. It must remain a secret forever."

I Sell Fate Through A System

Eastern · Hyowha

Polyp

2yr

Replied to waffle40582

Read it till about 100 or so till the plot armor became to much to bear. Dont remember much though

He remembered that when his soul drifted across the sea and came to Africa, he was hit by a pearl that was shining with dazzling light.

I Became A Mighty Lion

Sci-fi · Demon Cat

Polyp

2yr

Replied to DaoistJB

Well even than it still has its own logic, they kill the young cause its necessa ry. If those kids got older and stronger they and their new pride are going to lose their lives or at least their territory. But well i get your point being cruel is still cruel regardless of logic.

In fact, they were even more heartless than humans.

I Became A Mighty Lion

Sci-fi · Demon Cat

Polyp

2yr

Replied to Thomas_Tredwell

Hmm yeah make sense if you put it like that

A few black-skinned animals in red were holding long things and herding the cows and sheep, making strange sounds.

I Became A Mighty Lion

Sci-fi · Demon Cat

Polyp

2yr

Commented

In my opinion though the world became a better place. Maybe not for the humans but that is debatable in itself. After all humans will always fight and kill but now at least they get a common enemy

After reading Hamish's life, Bayu couldn't help but be silent. For Bayu, the person named Hamish is just a crazy otaku who is obsessed with the anime world. His desire to create superpowers inadvertently made him the father of technology. His findings are the result of accidental research. This is what happens when a genius is combined with eight-grade syndrome. The world is destroyed!

Bookmaster of the Library of Life's

Fantasy · hatentea

Polyp

2yr

Commented

Not doesnt, its isnt

The Sleepyhead Who Doesn't Popular

Bookmaster of the Library of Life's

Fantasy · hatentea

Polyp

2yr

Commented

Grammer is good, but sentence structure and word choices needs some work though

The man was convinced he was not kidnapped, because there were no traces of violence against him, nor did find the kidnapper's property such as ropes, sacks, handcuffs, etc. The first thing that came to his mind was teleportation, which he immediately denied, for thinking such a stupid reason.

Bookmaster of the Library of Life's

Fantasy · hatentea

Polyp

2yr

Commented

Killing is fine, i dont mind the mc killing because of necessity of his plans. But kust tell me if he is going to keep doing unnecessary things like mutilation. Cause i really dislike those things

"They shouldn't worry. No one should worry about death, for there is life after death, and who knows, if they get lucky in the next life." Girisia justified his reasoning with words that will twist his nature in the future.

In the mind of an NPC

Fantasy · GoGo

Polyp

2yr

Commented

I like this mc mentality, a real player mentality and i hope he would not change too much from this.

Though Girisia won't admit it, he was a lot like his brother, though their morales may differ, they still were brothers.

In the mind of an NPC

Fantasy · GoGo

Polyp

2yr

Commented

This novel feels more like a sketch than a complete one. Hmm, yeah, maybe because i am always reading on royal Road but this feels more like reading a practice write of amateaur writer.

Logically, she didn't think it was possible that Apollo with his frail figure and a wooden sword could do anything. Yet, her heart had a strange feeling that a miracle could occur.

The Laughing Swordsman

Fantasy · Disgrace

Polyp

2yr

Commented

Welcoming feeling?

"Welcome. It's been a while since we met anyone new," the receptionist, and older lady, with gray strands and a potbelly said. She had big red lips and a mole underneath it, giving her a homely and welcoming.