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your story line is good but the grammar is bad.pls try to get an editor to edit it for you

In the infinity pool area, Jun booked out the area for his brunch. He ordered barbeque for his wife luncheon events. Jun escorted his wife from their villa to the area. Linda, Nathan and Jimmy were already at the restaurant. The waitress attended their needs attentively. There was an array choice of foods. There were scallop, lobster, prawn, fish, meat and vegetable on the barbeque. There was whole suckling pig for the menu. Jun went all extent to coddle his wife. "Jun, this food is too much for us." Bella looked at Jun hopelessly. "You have to eat more so have more energy in the night." Jun tease her. Bella glanced to look at Linda and Nathan together. She could figure out that they were solved their problem. Jimmy's face looked plummet to see both couples. He felt alone after all. The weather was really nice and not too humid. The food were so delicious, and Bella couldn't stop eating it. Jun opened an expensive wine to accompany the food. "I knew now, why you had stopped me to become fool myself Linda" Nathan talked to Linda. Linda served Nathan some food on his plate. "How?" Linda tried to listen to him. "Looked at him. He literary put all Bella needs in front of his eyes. Nothing missed on his mark if it regarding Bella needs. I couldn't compete with such of excellent husband" Nathan smiled to Linda. "yup, it was really obvious for Jun acted. But you will be an excellent husband yourself." Linda comforted him. Nathan gave her kiss on her forehead. "Hello... Do you know me all by myself here." Jimmy protested to them

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