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It's a half-baked novel that doesn't make sense at all, not that you would expect too much realism from a web novel but this is just poor writing and isn't engaging at all.

It's an interesting concept and I would like to see a novel like this, but the way it's written is terrible. I hate the loose plot progression and the way the characters interact with the MC. In short, this is something you only read if you're not looking at anything other than the MC getting women to sleep with him and showing off while not leaving his house unless it's to save someone. It's honestly hurting my intelligence even though I'm only 19 chapters in. Just some examples of what makes my brain hurt reading this. The MC starts dating his neighbor, who he rarely talked to on the day he got the system. She literally has no reason for liking him, other than his looks. She even acknowledged that he didn't go out much at all other than to go to work and rarely interacted with others. He also sleeps with the reporter he literally just meets just because he's handsome despite just getting a girlfriend 2 days ago. He also used magic like it's normal in front of people, and even decided to advertise it without thinking of the trouble it's going to cause him. All because he thought more people are going to ask him to leave his house so he can refuse them to get more points for the system's store. It's just really dumb to me how he isn't keeping a low profile at this stage in the novel, and I understand it's to progress the plot but it's so sloppy in my opinion.

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A transmigrated scientist who became the 2nd prince of a kingdom that wants to understand the truths behind the magic that's found in the new world he's living in. All that's fine but there's a lot of scientific jargon and he spends most of his time performing experiments so far in the story so there's not much to review really. However it seems like there's going to be a trend in which all of his experiments and discoveries are going to turn into heavy info dumps that include a lot of chemical and element names and their functions when placed together or how they effect the human body. Of course it could end up differently I guess.

Don't make a novel about a vampire if he's not going to act like a vampire. Within the first 19 chapters he already obtained the ability to withstand sunlight and gains the same disposition [skin type] as humans. Another thing is that it all seems too easy for him. He literally starts off finding high-tier chests easily inside the Count's mansion, and later on they all become super convenient ways of strengthening himself or giving him exactly what he needs in his situation. Overall, if you wanna see a vampire act like a human and get protected by "legitimate" plot armor in the form of treasure chests then you'll like this.