prajdc

2yr

Commented

propose. proposed is past tense.

"What? He didn't proposed you?" Mary frowned and scoffed

Urban · Shining

2yr

Commented

just a suggestion. it's not counting !! the word should be courting death or courting a girl. minor grammatical mistakes.

"What? Is she counting her death?" Nick scrunched her eyebrows and asked

Urban · Shining

2yr

Commented

A suggestion... It is not counting. The correct word should be courting death or courting a girl. not counting a girl.

"What? Is she counting her death?" Nick scrunched her eyebrows and asked

Urban · Shining

3yr

Commented

is the story in present tense throughout?

ch 0 2 Stabilize the country.

Urban · Ms_Anonymous

3yr

Commented

why is the language in present and past tense ?

ch 0 2 Stabilize the country.

Urban · Ms_Anonymous

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