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I don't think he is particularly dumb and I do like smart main characters but its hard to write really smart main characters without them being all-knowing which while can be fun to read, it can hinder character development. We don't know enough about how his cultivation is going to effect him but I could totally see him becoming more intelligent from increasing his cultivation though but for now only awakening probably will only enhance his senses. We'll need to see how it goes with repeating mistakes without learning, I could see it being extremely annoying but I think the Author has set up a good foundation for the main characters to grow and I think the Author is pretty competent so far but you never know.

I thought I'd leave a review, since most of the other reviews aren't particularly helpful. The story has the basis of a man being reincarnated in the world of Danmachi with the ability to cultivate, pretty cool premise so far! Writing : The quality of the writing is better than most on webnovel, which isn't saying much admittedly, but comparatively the writing quality is great and I didn't notice any outstanding flaws when reading. Story: Next is the problem some people had with chapter 3, the MC didn't explicitly say the world is fictional but essentially that records of the world of Danmachi exists in his world and that includes future knowledge. I think the change of changing Bell into a girl is a interesting idea which adds a lot to the substance of the story as it doesn't remove the character entirely, which would de-rail the entire story plot and adds a interesting plot point. Characters: The changes the author introduced to the story doesn't effect the flow of the story as there were some changes to the world and backstory of Bell to reflect the changes to the character so it isn't just slapping some flex tape on the character and calling it a day. Some degree of effort went into thinking about how the new Bell would of grown up and how that would effect her character and how the world itself would react to a female Bell. Hestia seems about the same as the original material, not many other characters have been introduced so far as of chapter 6, but I'm looking forward to what other changes occur due to the presence of the Tian. Main Character: That goes onto the final point which is the Tian himself, he isn't particularly very smart, self-admittedly and hasn't really had much chance to show more of his character but a good foundation is there to build upon. TLDR: Some of the other reviews are unduly harsh for miniscule or miscounstrued reasons but it is ultimately a story with good potential, and you should give it a try if you like Danmachi or the general themes.