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there's someone who can edit for u for free, plz Co-operate with him

This story has potential, i really like the story but here are some problems so far after finishing the current updates 1) Quality: Please get a editor, i saw someone commented they will audit for free, the story itself is understandable but the reading experience is downgraded because of small mistakes 2) MainCharacter behaviour is sometimes erratic, like spending some coins, sometimes he's stingy but few chaps later he gives money out like its nothing 3) Chapter update: If u could increase the chapter update with an editor i can really see this story blowing up, just needs a little more love 4) World building is average, we don't really see a description of the world around him, finished all the chaps but i still dont know anything about the world he stays in except there's two/three kingdoms and a dessert ***Main problem would be the grammar/writing quality although understandable it leaves more to be desired, and if we could get more chaps the story would get even more attention**

Great novel, can't really find any fault in the writing. And if u want to read about a magical alien in a different world, who can evolve and can evolve others. . . this is ur novel to read. Try it and you wouldn't regret it

Pretend the typos do not exist

Exquisite writing, great character and world building, no giant plot holes. If u want to read about an evolving monster who can use magic without the cliche story of a chinese LN, definitely recommend this.