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please stop it , i am going to die ... wht there so much filler ?

The forest stretched out before us like a vast ocean of darkness and melancholy. The monotony of the gray and gloomy trees extended as far as the eye could see, creating an oppressive and depressing atmosphere. Every corner of the forest seemed to be imbued with a palpable sadness, as if the weight of desolation and despair hung in the air.

Villain's Valor: A Noble Fantasy Resurrection

Villain's Valor: A Noble Fantasy Resurrection

Fantasy · Roseiinthegarden

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over explaining in places like these moment of great importance or critical moment is great , but it lose its touch when the last couple chapter are over explained and now i dont seem to enjoy these moment . but its great never the less . just hope not all chapter are over explained .

The drops fall from the sky, cold as ice itself, splashing against my body and soaking every fiber of my being. Around me, the place resonates with the deafening sound of the rain pounding against the ground, but in my mind, everything remains in an ominous silence. My eyes are locked on the demon, completely ignoring the rain soaking my clothes and armor, as if in a trance, trapped in a separate world where only she and I exist.

Villain's Valor: A Noble Fantasy Resurrection

Villain's Valor: A Noble Fantasy Resurrection

Fantasy · Roseiinthegarden

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than*

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bid*

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if i want to use the (silk )

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any kind of energy **

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replace the **

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angery*

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to be*

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boy**

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its *** beast and the like use with then (it) not he , she unless they are fully sentint

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have nothing ** need fixing

"Heh! You don't even have a corpse anymore, and you just nothing but yourself to blame!" He coldly laughed as he turned to look at Lia Alstreim, "You're next!"

Divine Emperor of Death

Divine Emperor of Death

Eastern · Stardust_Breaker

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