Crocodile59

2mth

Commented

Ok, Copy Technique is possible because of Rika who saves the technique as to use different technique changes something in brain.

ch 0 2 Birth and Wishes

Being adopted by Mei Mei in JJK

Anime & Comics · Moody_Passerby

Crocodile59

4mth

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I am willing to pay dollars for the additional chapters but you should be have multiple tiers as I general go for basic tier unless chapters consistency and story is exordinary for example, Hard Enough Pokemon fanfic etc. Depending on the story progression and quality it will depend.

ch 30 Serious Question! (Not a chapter)

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Anime & Comics · TOS

Crocodile59

4mth

Commented

It is okay to use the pics but make to not use too many pics as well as that will make readers go to comments section too many times and also do describe the person etc. as that will help you practice the writing for future books.

ch 27 After the Finals. (3)

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Anime & Comics · TOS

Crocodile59

4mth

Commented

So Sakuna type Harry… interesting …

ch 47 Chapter 47: Triple casting style

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

Crocodile59

5mth

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*Improving

ch 20 Winter Cup Finals. (5)

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Anime & Comics · TOS

Crocodile59

5mth

Commented

Writing is definitely impromptu chapter to chapter and it is good that you are taking valid criticism to improve your writing.

ch 20 Winter Cup Finals. (5)

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Anime & Comics · TOS

Crocodile59

5mth

Posted

Good story . But I feel you are repeating few phrases multiple times. Especially regarding his experience, we get it he has experience in previous life don’t say it multiple time in the same chapter. And I am happy that you have plans till nba but first focus on high school and then you can see if you can integrate these players in nba or not.

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Anime & Comics · TOS

Crocodile59

7mth

Commented

Good fic. One thing I have to say is you use exclamations too much? It is ignorable but somewhat annoying.

ch 117 Chapter 115 : Fight Begins

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

Crocodile59

7mth

Commented

One thing I have to say conversations fells kind of forced. You are good at explaining the scenes but the dialogues between scenes feel inorganic or kinda rushed.

ch 45 [The Secret Files Of Agent 13] - Betrayal And Deception -The Fallout Of Howard Stark's Alleged Treason

Marvel: The Journey

Movies · AidenUsmani

Crocodile59

9mth

Commented

Good story but one thing I say slow the pace man, I know you want to get to time skip but don’t fast track everything.

ch 20 Missions

Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash

Anime & Comics · Palpable_Banana

Crocodile59

2yr

Commented

no

ch 17 Harem, or No Harem?

Percy Jackson: Human Gamer

Book&Literature · Plebston323

Crocodile59

3yr

Posted

This is superb book. Hope it will grow futher so that they make an anime out of it.........................................................................................................................................

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

Crocodile59

3yr

Commented

Dude take rest, story can wait. Health is more important than this.

ch 89 I wouldn't mind dying by your hand...

One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

Crocodile59

3yr

Commented

small correction it is not Lucifer....it is Lucilfer.

ch 0 3 Application

Leon Zoldyck

Anime & Comics · Black_Paladyn

Crocodile59

3yr

Commented

interesting concept but fix feels like u r giving highlights of his life not a story. U have go improve on that.

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Crocodile59

3yr

Commented

is it Water Breathing or u just named it same.

ch 0 2 Childhood...

One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · HolyJoker

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3yr

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Reborn in black clover with Demon Slaying magic

Anime & Comics · Arada

Crocodile59

3yr

Commented

I don't think Riko and Kiyoshi are couple.

ch 190 Meeting Seirin

Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

Crocodile59

3yr

Posted

One of the best Kuruko No Basket Ball fic I have ever read. And one of the few fics where Author actually knows real basketball 🏀 then just from the manga.

Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

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3yr

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Hxh

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Anime & Comics · Otaku_king

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Being adopted by Mei Mei in JJK

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Kuroko's Basketball__: I'm Shinji Koganei

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Marvel: The Journey

Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash

Percy Jackson: Human Gamer

My Vampire System

One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman (COMPLETED)

Leon Zoldyck

One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman (COMPLETED)

Reborn in black clover with Demon Slaying magic

Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

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